Seeds Bound On Its Own Perfume

What is in a name?  If you were an arid desert rose in bloom
A flourishing garden would be transformed in my womb
Weaving greenery of verdant emerald green whom
Embraced by Love’s profound budding existence will groom 
Fashion Buds not of the desert or garden in bloom,
but joint forebear seeds bound on its own   perfume



1/16/2017
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Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:19 PM
Very nice, Eve. I love OOM rhymes. They are so pretty. (and BIG congrats)
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I think I misunderstood the contest Hugs
Daniel Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Great write on your lovely name, Eve:) congratulations:)
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, Jo Hugs
May Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, Joseph, Hugs
Burch Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations Eve!!! Well done. Big Hugggs!! Deb
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Deborah, and congratulations to you as well Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 5:02 PM
A lovely monorhyme in which the romantic mood and imagery take pride of place. Congrats on your fine win, Eve. Hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Paul , for your kind inspiring words and the congratulations :) Hugs Eve
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 2:20 PM
This is a great monorhyme for a beloved name. I have read and reread to enjoy its images. Great write. a 7 Congrats.
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Thank you, Janis, and congratulations to you as well Hugs Eve
Rycroft Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Yes a very good poem x well done x
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Wendy, so very much for your compliment and your welcoming visit Hugs
Warrior Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Very well crafted my friend...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Thank you, ^WW^
Murray Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Those seeds bore a bountiful monorhyme Eve.
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Jean, they sure did :)
Nusker Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 11:50 PM
Beautifully expressed. I loved each phrase from beg till end.
May Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 10:16 PM
A profound end line Eve...Nicely penned
Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 5:04 PM
This is really good, Eve. I find monorhymes far too difficult, but you have done a wonderful job!
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Thank you so much :-) hugs
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Your imagery is amazing Eve:-) lovely monorhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Thank you , Jan :-)
Green Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 3:59 PM
Wow, I loved this one Eve. So very beautiful and mesmerizing.
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 4:25 PM
Thank you, Chris, I truly love your inspirational complements the mean alot.
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