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Seeds Bound On Its Own Perfume

What is in a name? If you were an arid desert rose in bloom A flourishing garden would be transformed in my womb Weaving greenery of verdant emerald green whom Embraced by Love’s profound budding existence will groom Fashion Buds not of the desert or garden in bloom, but joint forebear seeds bound on its own perfume 1/16/2017

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Date: 1/21/2017 9:19:00 PM
Very nice, Eve. I love OOM rhymes. They are so pretty. (and BIG congrats)
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I think I misunderstood the contest Hugs
Date: 1/20/2017 10:45:00 PM
Great write on your lovely name, Eve:) congratulations:)
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Jo Hugs
Date: 1/19/2017 8:39:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, Hugs
Date: 1/19/2017 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations Eve!!! Well done. Big Hugggs!! Deb
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thank you, Deborah, and congratulations to you as well Hugs Eve
Date: 1/19/2017 5:02:00 PM
A lovely monorhyme in which the romantic mood and imagery take pride of place. Congrats on your fine win, Eve. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thank you, Paul , for your kind inspiring words and the congratulations :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/19/2017 2:20:00 PM
This is a great monorhyme for a beloved name. I have read and reread to enjoy its images. Great write. a 7 Congrats.
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, and congratulations to you as well Hugs Eve
Date: 1/18/2017 4:38:00 PM
Yes a very good poem x well done x
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy, so very much for your compliment and your welcoming visit Hugs
Date: 1/18/2017 8:59:00 AM
Very well crafted my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 1/18/2017 11:39:00 PM
Thank you, ^WW^
Date: 1/17/2017 6:31:00 PM
Those seeds bore a bountiful monorhyme Eve.
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Date: 1/17/2017 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Jean, they sure did :)
Date: 1/16/2017 11:50:00 PM
Beautifully expressed. I loved each phrase from beg till end.
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Date: 1/16/2017 10:16:00 PM
A profound end line Eve...Nicely penned
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Date: 1/16/2017 5:04:00 PM
This is really good, Eve. I find monorhymes far too difficult, but you have done a wonderful job!
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Date: 1/16/2017 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so much :-) hugs
Date: 1/16/2017 4:42:00 PM
Your imagery is amazing Eve:-) lovely monorhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2017 10:14:00 PM
Thank you , Jan :-)
Date: 1/16/2017 3:59:00 PM
Wow, I loved this one Eve. So very beautiful and mesmerizing.
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Date: 1/16/2017 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Chris, I truly love your inspirational complements the mean alot.

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