Notes About The Poem

Seeds and Soil


Some fell along the hard path in the field,
and so were left for birds to peck and eat.
Some fell on shallow soil; therefore, the yield
was sparse, for many withered in the heat.
And some were cast among the thorny brush
which choked and killed the tender shoots in time.
But still, some fell on good ground, rich and lush,
where splendid crops achieved a fruitful prime.

Which soil are we for seeds of Grace to grow
to harvest?  Hard? Or shallow? Thorny? Good?
A little of all four, for sure, we know.
But if we soften, deepen, pull dead wood,

God's gracious work will germinate and thrive;
in spite of all, His glory will survive.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Premiere Contest No. 110
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 11/09/2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: English Sonnet
Sponsor: Janice Canerdy
Form: Shakespearian Sonnet
Judged: 11/05/2016

Ref: Matthew 13:3-8 - The Parable of the Sower and the Seed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 9:15 PM
Blessings and congratulations on your win, Sandra - nicely done! :-)
Kroll Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Much food for thought here. Congrats, Sandra! Kathy
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November 10, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Well done. Congrats, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Excellent, Sandra! Congrats. Janice
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 10:19 AM
A beautiful poem Sandra, congrats :)
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November 11, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thank you very much, Gary! Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:30 AM
a glorious chant, sandra.. sending my best congrats for a job well done.. huggs
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Thank you very much, Nette, for your supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra
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November 6, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Fantastic, a personal favourite.
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thank you very much, Richard, for your uplifting comment! Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Congratulations!
Dutta Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Congrats Sandra to win on your sweet sonnet. Hugs
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha! Hugs, Sandra
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November 5, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Many congrats on your win. Lainey
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Thank you, Lainey! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Janice
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for offering a great contest for Sonnets (my favorite form), and for granting me such a fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
Raven Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Hi Sandra, you have written this one so well. How true your words are. They stay true to the theme throughout and i know, no matter how much i try to be a good person i shall always make mistakes. I shall always be a part of all four and yet i shall always strive to stand on good ground. An excellent write Sandra. I throw seeds upon your carefully cultivated earth of words and it does grow a seven. A 7 for this wonderful write....Vlad.
Haight Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Thank you so much for your positive feedback and supportive comments, Vladislav. I am so honored that you like my poem and have rated it so highly. Thanks again, Sandra
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February 3, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Sandra, thank you for the wonderful reply. LINDA
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February 3, 2016 at 3:25 AM
Sandra, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. I always appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Also, I love your new avatar! Hugs, Sandra
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January 30, 2016 at 3:38 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sandra..
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma! Hugs, Sandra
Cwiak Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Beautiful, Sandra. Not many of us will admit to having our lives strewn in all four places, but you have done so with great insight and greater words. Kudos!
Haight Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Thank you so much, Dan. I appreciate your supportive comments and kudos! Sandra
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January 27, 2016 at 7:05 PM
I remember this parable so well from sunday school class. You chose a great topic and showed it quite well. Congrats to you.
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
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January 27, 2016 at 4:28 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win. --SKAT --
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in this heart felt contest, just beautiful...*smiles* -luloo
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Thank you so much, Laura Loo. Hugs, Sandra
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January 27, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra, I'm sure it's no coincidence that this was the Gospel reading today. Best wishes, from jean
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much, Jean. Amazing how the contest was judged today! Didn't know, but I looked it up, and you are right! I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
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January 27, 2016 at 12:05 PM
reaping the beauty of good deeds glorifies one's acts... wonderful verse and sweet congrats, sandra!
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much, Nette. I appreciate your uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
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January 27, 2016 at 11:20 AM
One of my favorite parables chosen by one of my favorite poets. Congratulations on your placement with the contest.
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Thank you so much for our visit and encouraging and supportive comment and congrats, Rob. Much appreciated. Sandra
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January 27, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Sandra! You deserve it! :) -HANS
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Thank you so much, Hansteven. Sandra
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January 27, 2016 at 4:00 AM
Sandra, one of my fave parables, i like how you relay the parable in few lines, and put a reflective tone on the half of the poem and ending it, highlighting God's graciousness.. CONGRATS!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Thank you for a wonderful, inspirational contest, Olive, and for your supportive comments and nice placement in your contest. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
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