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Seeds and Soil


Some fell along the hard path in the field,
and so were left for birds to peck and eat.
Some fell on shallow soil; therefore, the yield
was sparse, for many withered in the heat.
And some were cast among the thorny brush
which choked and killed the tender shoots in time.
But still, some fell on good ground, rich and lush,
where splendid crops achieved a fruitful prime.

Which soil are we for seeds of Grace to grow
to harvest?  Hard? Or shallow? Thorny? Good?
A little of all four, for sure, we know.
But if we soften, deepen, pull dead wood,

God's gracious work will germinate and thrive;
in spite of all, His glory will survive.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Premiere Contest No. 110
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 11/09/2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: English Sonnet
Sponsor: Janice Canerdy
Form: Shakespearian Sonnet
Judged: 11/05/2016

Ref: Matthew 13:3-8 - The Parable of the Sower and the Seed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/11/2017 9:15:00 PM
Blessings and congratulations on your win, Sandra - nicely done! :-)
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Date: 11/11/2017 10:10:00 AM
Much food for thought here. Congrats, Sandra! Kathy
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:39:00 PM
Well done. Congrats, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Sandra
Date: 11/9/2017 4:44:00 PM
Excellent, Sandra! Congrats. Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/9/2017 10:19:00 AM
A beautiful poem Sandra, congrats :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/11/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gary! Sandra
Date: 11/6/2016 9:30:00 AM
a glorious chant, sandra.. sending my best congrats for a job well done.. huggs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2016 6:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nette, for your supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/6/2016 9:17:00 AM
Fantastic, a personal favourite.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard, for your uplifting comment! Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/6/2016 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations!
Date: 11/6/2016 1:13:00 AM
Congrats Sandra to win on your sweet sonnet. Hugs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/5/2016 7:29:00 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Many congrats on your win. Lainey
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Lainey! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/5/2016 6:02:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for offering a great contest for Sonnets (my favorite form), and for granting me such a fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/16/2016 5:51:00 PM
Hi Sandra, you have written this one so well. How true your words are. They stay true to the theme throughout and i know, no matter how much i try to be a good person i shall always make mistakes. I shall always be a part of all four and yet i shall always strive to stand on good ground. An excellent write Sandra. I throw seeds upon your carefully cultivated earth of words and it does grow a seven. A 7 for this wonderful write....Vlad.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/17/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for your positive feedback and supportive comments, Vladislav. I am so honored that you like my poem and have rated it so highly. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2016 9:56:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for the wonderful reply. LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:25:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. I always appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Also, I love your new avatar! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/30/2016 3:38:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sandra..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/3/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/29/2016 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful, Sandra. Not many of us will admit to having our lives strewn in all four places, but you have done so with great insight and greater words. Kudos!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/29/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dan. I appreciate your supportive comments and kudos! Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 7:05:00 PM
I remember this parable so well from sunday school class. You chose a great topic and showed it quite well. Congrats to you.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 4:28:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win. --SKAT --
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 3:05:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in this heart felt contest, just beautiful...*smiles* -luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Laura Loo. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra, I'm sure it's no coincidence that this was the Gospel reading today. Best wishes, from jean
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jean. Amazing how the contest was judged today! Didn't know, but I looked it up, and you are right! I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 12:05:00 PM
reaping the beauty of good deeds glorifies one's acts... wonderful verse and sweet congrats, sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nette. I appreciate your uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 11:20:00 AM
One of my favorite parables chosen by one of my favorite poets. Congratulations on your placement with the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for our visit and encouraging and supportive comment and congrats, Rob. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sandra! You deserve it! :) -HANS
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Hansteven. Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 4:00:00 AM
Sandra, one of my fave parables, i like how you relay the parable in few lines, and put a reflective tone on the half of the poem and ending it, highlighting God's graciousness.. CONGRATS!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thank you for a wonderful, inspirational contest, Olive, and for your supportive comments and nice placement in your contest. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/27/2016 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
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