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Seed of a Lie

No more than meager words were said, the size of parsley seeds, that’s all... The weight they held, with roots that spread now grows a tree ten stories tall The size of parsley seeds, that’s all... although we tried to make amends now, grows a tree ten stories tall. And digs its roots, without an end Although we tried to make amends, the cross-grained knot that scars the wood,... now digs its roots without an end We'd cut it down, if chance we could The cross-grained knot that scars the wood can't be erased or disappear We'd cut it down if chance we could A lie once told, cannot come back Lies spread their limbs and reappear The weight they held, with roots that spread a lie once told, cannot come back No more than meager words were said ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Pantoum poem Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/17/2016 8:50:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:43:00 AM
deep Carrie, glad Deb enjoyed :-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I enjoyed your pantoum. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:44:00 PM
Carrie, this is a nice winning poem...Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... xox Linda
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed your story.
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Date: 8/5/2013 6:28:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Everyone seemed to have an aversion to periods? At least you gave me a line break ;) :P, I wonder why? Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2013 8:59:00 PM
A fantastic write, Carrie! I'm surprised it didn't place higher. Congrats on your Honorable Mention! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:11:00 AM
Hi congratulations Carrie luv, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:46:00 PM
CARRIE, your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:19:00 PM
congrats' SandyIvy
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:17:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you Carrie for your 1st Place win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:42:00 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on placing first in the contest. The tongue is the most powerful weapon and you have protrayed it so magically. Caryl
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:41:00 AM
Wonderful message here Carrie!Excellent write.Congrats on your 1st place win.Thanks a lot for your inspiring words at my pages--kashinath
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Date: 3/19/2011 7:48:00 AM
Wonderful writing. congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/19/2011 12:18:00 AM
oh this is wonderful Carrie, truly superb. congrats on a deserved number one. Harry
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:19:00 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear Carrie.
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:38:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Paula's Pantoum contest.. a vibrant write luv.. enjoy ...
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Date: 3/18/2011 2:38:00 PM
way to go
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Date: 3/18/2011 1:02:00 PM
Carrie, Your poem could be likened to a parable from Jesus or one of those catchy lil stories that Abe Lincoln told to convey his point to other politicians....I LOVE IT! Words, lies,....the power they behold is unreal! Your win in this contest is clearly understandable. Love, Gwendoldn
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:11:00 AM
An awesome job lady Carrie, great to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy first place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/16/2011 1:05:00 PM
Just brilliant!!Love it---kashinath
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:41:00 PM
wow, Carrie, deep poem and WELL crafted. A sure fire winner. I wrote one like this a long time ago, where I likened gossip to the seeds on the wind. I like how you went with the tree idea. Excellent!
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:10:00 PM
Awesome and lovely expressions , Good luck in the contest, Carrie. How true a lie once cannot come back,
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Date: 3/5/2011 3:40:00 PM
LThis is an eellent entry and a winner in my mind. Great work as usual Carrie. Love, Joyce
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