Seed of a Lie

No more than meager words were said,
the size of parsley seeds, that’s all...
The weight they held, with roots that spread
now grows a tree ten stories tall

The size of parsley seeds, that’s all...
although we tried to make amends
now, grows a tree ten stories tall.
And digs its roots, without an end

Although we tried to make amends,
the cross-grained knot that scars the wood,...
now digs its roots without an end
We'd cut it down, if chance we could

The cross-grained knot that scars the wood
can't be erased or disappear
We'd cut it down if chance we could
A lie once told, cannot come back

Lies spread their limbs and reappear
The weight they held, with roots that spread
a lie once told, cannot come back
No more than meager words were said



----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Pantoum poem Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Roper Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:43 AM
deep Carrie, glad Deb enjoyed :-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~
Johnson Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I enjoyed your pantoum. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 7:44 PM
Carrie, this is a nice winning poem...Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... xox Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed your story.
Guzzi Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 6:28 PM
Congrad's on your win! Everyone seemed to have an aversion to periods? At least you gave me a line break ;) :P, I wonder why? Light & Love
Merryman Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 8:59 PM
A fantastic write, Carrie! I'm surprised it didn't place higher. Congrats on your Honorable Mention! Love, Kim
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February 22, 2013 at 1:11 AM
Hi congratulations Carrie luv, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 8:46 PM
CARRIE, your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA
Ivy D Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 8:19 PM
congrats' SandyIvy
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:17 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you Carrie for your 1st Place win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 7:42 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on placing first in the contest. The tongue is the most powerful weapon and you have protrayed it so magically. Caryl
Poet Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Wonderful message here Carrie!Excellent write.Congrats on your 1st place win.Thanks a lot for your inspiring words at my pages--kashinath
Johnson Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Wonderful writing. congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
Horsman Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 12:18 AM
oh this is wonderful Carrie, truly superb. congrats on a deserved number one. Harry
Mannan Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear Carrie.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Paula's Pantoum contest.. a vibrant write luv.. enjoy ...
Kopp Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 2:38 PM
way to go
Song Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Carrie, Your poem could be likened to a parable from Jesus or one of those catchy lil stories that Abe Lincoln told to convey his point to other politicians....I LOVE IT! Words, lies,....the power they behold is unreal! Your win in this contest is clearly understandable. Love, Gwendoldn
Freeman Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 11:11 AM
An awesome job lady Carrie, great to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy first place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Just brilliant!!Love it---kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 10:41 PM
wow, Carrie, deep poem and WELL crafted. A sure fire winner. I wrote one like this a long time ago, where I likened gossip to the seeds on the wind. I like how you went with the tree idea. Excellent!
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 5:10 PM
Awesome and lovely expressions , Good luck in the contest, Carrie. How true a lie once cannot come back,
Johnson Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 3:40 PM
LThis is an eellent entry and a winner in my mind. Great work as usual Carrie. Love, Joyce
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