Seed Money

All nine feet of green, moving through the reeds
Leaving around town strange packets of seeds
With a note, asking a curious deed
To till at night only, with utmost speed
Sunburn strips the magic, leaving just weeds

My Pa lectured it would never succeed
But having a number of mouths to feed
Under the moon, I planted what we'd need
For a crop to nourish, flower and breed

Townsfolk thought me foolish, would scoff and plead,
'Recover your senses; they're worthless beads!'
Yet they leapt by cresting heights to exceed
The sky's wide reach, blossoming a stampede
Of gold coins, rubies, and diamonds - indeed!

8/16/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Proxenos Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:00 AM
I love the outcome of the seeds overnight, 'gold coins, rubies and diamonds indeed!' You sure proved everyone wrong, a fun poem. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Rose  Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Ah, I love it, how nice would that be if it were possible, Nice read dear poet.
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 11:49 AM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Michelle :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 12:03 AM
Wow, the ultimate money tree, congratulations on your very worthy win, in the contest..
Toney Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Michelle, I come back with congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest! ~Mark
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:23 PM
ooh la la. where can I get THESE seeds. That was great, Michelle. Congrats on the win.
Devonshire Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:11 PM
Wow, so creative, Michelle. Love the story you told in verse. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Watt Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 10:52 PM
To follow your lead, I'll gladly concede, this delightful read, your monorhyme screed my boredom has freed, all readers agreed a win guaranteed! Fabulous monorhyme about the mystery seeds, my friend. Loved the reference to the Jolly Green Giant. Don't forget to wear a helmet when you walk under that tree!
Leffanta Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Did you save some seeds for next year? Aloha! Rico
Toney Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Michelle, your monorhyme is sublime :) Cheers! ~Mark
Ermine Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 7:01 PM
The need for gems screams!! Awesome seed poem, great mono which ties it brilliantly.
Faulkner Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 10:47 PM
I wish I had plants that made gems! Thanks for commenting, Sigrid-
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Strictly organic, those seeds. lol. Seriously, they sure beat most packets of seed one gets or can buy. Entertaining monorhyme, Michelle! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Organic, straight from the Giant's garden - thanks for your visit!
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