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Seed Money

All nine feet of green, moving through the reeds Leaving around town strange packets of seeds With a note, asking a curious deed To till at night only, with utmost speed Sunburn strips the magic, leaving just weeds My Pa lectured it would never succeed But having a number of mouths to feed Under the moon, I planted what we'd need For a crop to nourish, flower and breed Townsfolk thought me foolish, would scoff and plead, 'Recover your senses; they're worthless beads!' Yet they leapt by cresting heights to exceed The sky's wide reach, blossoming a stampede Of gold coins, rubies, and diamonds - indeed! 8/16/20

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Date: 8/23/2020 7:00:00 AM
I love the outcome of the seeds overnight, 'gold coins, rubies and diamonds indeed!' You sure proved everyone wrong, a fun poem. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/22/2020 3:25:00 AM
Ah, I love it, how nice would that be if it were possible, Nice read dear poet.
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Date: 8/19/2020 11:49:00 AM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Michelle :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2020 12:03:00 AM
Wow, the ultimate money tree, congratulations on your very worthy win, in the contest..
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Date: 8/18/2020 6:08:00 PM
Michelle, I come back with congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest! ~Mark
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Date: 8/18/2020 4:23:00 PM
ooh la la. where can I get THESE seeds. That was great, Michelle. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/18/2020 2:11:00 PM
Wow, so creative, Michelle. Love the story you told in verse. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2020 10:52:00 PM
To follow your lead, I'll gladly concede, this delightful read, your monorhyme screed my boredom has freed, all readers agreed a win guaranteed! Fabulous monorhyme about the mystery seeds, my friend. Loved the reference to the Jolly Green Giant. Don't forget to wear a helmet when you walk under that tree!
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Date: 8/17/2020 2:19:00 PM
Did you save some seeds for next year? Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/17/2020 11:25:00 AM
Michelle, your monorhyme is sublime :) Cheers! ~Mark
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Date: 8/16/2020 7:01:00 PM
The need for gems screams!! Awesome seed poem, great mono which ties it brilliantly.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/16/2020 10:47:00 PM
I wish I had plants that made gems! Thanks for commenting, Sigrid-
Date: 8/16/2020 2:18:00 PM
Strictly organic, those seeds. lol. Seriously, they sure beat most packets of seed one gets or can buy. Entertaining monorhyme, Michelle! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/16/2020 2:43:00 PM
Organic, straight from the Giant's garden - thanks for your visit!

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