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See What You Will,,, Be Who You Are ....

A mind that drives choices on the crossroads A smile that captures the hardest of hard A voice that calls your name I have lived a lie and my heart did deny I take control of my inner being A survial of time nor will I scream A positive thought drowns all negative I will light my own fate of destiny As the candle flickers I will see through the darkest I am here to believe in me I have felt pain that breaks the heart I have felt passion that takes you to the next level Even had secrets of another times Many sides to what you see Some may find this in me I will stand tall even to the ones who make you fall My dignity will carry me you will see I hold strength from passing lessons Life is challenge this we know I take the reigns of my crystal ball For my spirit is above the clouds I shine in mind as a child An innocences that finds As the fool card take the chances that you find See what you will... be who you are ....

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Date: 8/12/2010 1:19:00 AM
We can only be who we are, for others to let us be who we are and, and let us be who we are together, united. Nice piece Sarah >> James
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Date: 8/10/2010 11:02:00 AM
Ps. Smile ~ This gem of "A Beautiful Treasure" is a fave; just as was "Your Beauties" smail from yesterday ~ Smile, "Your So Beautiful Sarah; So Very Deep Inside, 'Your Beautiful Eyes'" ~
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:54:00 AM
~ Smile, I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing wonderfully today dear and, this is an "Astonishingly Profound & Beautiful Poem of Strength & Beauty!!!" ~ "Thank You" for the smail yes., although again, I rarely do this mail!? Yet I shall mail "Your Beauty" later this day ~ And, I see "Your Beauty" has more poes so, allow me to go be blessed by they ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'Your Beauty' Always," John!:) ~ Smile, on we go....
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:47:00 AM
~ Smile, there "You" go again, causing me to be aside myself....But that's alright, for I have thought about it and, whether it is anything at all, it is a wonderful feeling and I, shall hold onto it until it is gone; this amazing emotion that "Your Beauty" brings, again deep unto my soul ~ Its a beautiful feeling, to find such a poetess whom can, cause such beautiful splendors to be ~ "Thank You" for being "You, 'Beautiful Sarah!!!'" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:35:00 AM
Smile ~ I see "You, 'Beautiful Sarah'" ~ I see the soul of someone very lovely, and very deep it seems; their words, brushing upon my very own; beautiful it is; and cannot be denied; but I do not wish it to either; as I weigh these truths in mind, and ask myself, what is the bottom line? How I feel her inside, stirring; crazy, but so very beautiful; so beautiful "You Are, 'Sarah!!!'" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:45:00 AM
very nice Sarah, enjoyed your poetry this morning
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:25:00 AM
like the awakening of the soul,envisioning things unselfishly...very nice sarah...peace , jay
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:32:00 AM
Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Sarah. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:54:00 AM
wonderful deep sincerity here, love this poem. Harry
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