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See …a monarch butterfly’s silently fast fluttering wings flickering shadows breaking sunbeams… — (with inspiration from Darlene DeBeaulieu’s poem “The Rain”) (c) sally young eslinger 7/9/2024 Thanks to God ——

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/10/2024 1:40:00 AM

Great alliteration, Sally. A marvellous write.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/9/2024 1:08:00 PM

What a beautiful write for a beautiful butterfly...... Have a beautiful day writing away............

Edward Wraith

Date: 7/9/2024 11:48:00 AM

Lovely Summer/Spring time imagery here. Bright, colorful and heart warming. Beautiful write. Well done

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/9/2024 10:19:00 AM

Very beautiful, lovely imagery!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/9/2024 10:00:00 AM

Hello Sally , thank you for the wonderful comment on my poem. ik just read your poem. A beautiful poem about a butterfly. I am making this poem my dear friend a fav. Love, Darlene/

Ink Empress

Date: 7/9/2024 9:42:00 AM

How beautiful is this pretty poem woven with such vivid imagery. In few words youve delivered one worthy of a fave and also one that would remain in my mind for a long time. I hope you are doing well. Its always so good to read you and see you posting! Sending you light today and always