Seductive Predator

Piqued by the aura of your gleam
You were the hum which broke my vertical solitude
Intruder within the interlude of my vacancy
Through refractions of your eyes, you pulled me in
The wild scents wrap you in silent threat
In no time you possess me through your alluring kiss
I feel the rhythm of my beat, which melting in enigmatic bliss
Manipulated by your shifty flexibility, you stole my universe
Moreover my sanity
Still under your spell, I draw the curiosity
I let my self fall as a feather blown by the wind
You are a natural sedative beneath my subconsciousness
An antidote for my heart, but a toxic to my brain
Inspired by the quote of ALLYWALLY94
an 18 years old female poet who I met in instagram
"He was poison. You were my antidote."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/7/2015 10:25:00 AM
whoa...did the room just go thermal hot? lol! Hi Yanny...my, your words have some nice groove...:-). Agree with FJ, last 2 lines are my fav lines too. Loved your sexy poem! HUgs!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/7/2015 10:46:00 AM
Hello Kim, the room is on fire! Lol! Thank you for your warm visit today, I was also loved the last part, it was inspired by an 18 years old girl poet in instagram, her quote inspired me :) I will put her quote in this page for a credit after this, :D
Date: 6/2/2015 6:55:00 AM
I am beyond impressed, this piece intoxicates.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/2/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Rick for your visit today :D hug, yanny
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