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Seduction On the Quay

He caught the faint scent of perfume as she walked by
The treacly fragrance of gardenias caused him to sigh
She moved with grace and poise that caught his eye
Her sultry wink made him quiver at what it might imply

She walked towards the beach, near Harper's Quay
He followed at a distance on this sunny Summer day
A bit of a stalker, he seemed to me, looking for prey 
Should I warn her? A quandary to me. Yay or nay?

This sort of thing never happens in this quaint town
I watched him; and on my face, I imagined a frown
Wind ruffled her platinum hair, her eyes, soft brown
That guy moved in, and I was going to bring him down

She welcomed him with a flirty smile of recognition
Seems it's a game they play; the seduction rendition
where he offers a proposition; she nods in submission
Do I deserve a penance for my erroneous suspicion?



February 12, 2021
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Date: 2/13/2021 11:12:00 AM
"Her sultry wink made him quiver at what it might imply" Quiver indeed!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 2:13:00 AM
Thanks, Mark. Seduction can be a game.
Date: 2/13/2021 4:33:00 AM
No you don't, weirdos are everywhere and its always best to err on the side of caution, well written Jenna. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/13/2021 5:09:00 AM
That is true, Tom, but these two are a couple who like to play a game of "Come and get me." Thank you. It's a bit chilly but I'll enjoy the weekend despite it...and I hope yours is fantabulous.
Date: 2/13/2021 4:06:00 AM
Definitely a winner I believe. It's a lovely poem that brightens the heart... beautiful words. God bless you always, sweet lady... with love and prayers, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/13/2021 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Gina. That kind of game would be fun; now if only I had someone who knew how to play. lol
Date: 2/13/2021 3:53:00 AM
I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. But the woman you described!!! Wow. Good thing I'm old now :) ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/13/2021 4:00:00 AM
Victor, age doesn't have a choke hold on our thoughts, and not always on our body. You enjoyed this one, so you're not THAT old. Hugs.
Date: 2/12/2021 11:36:00 AM
Sounds like a winner! Mine I wrote after watching a show with royal court intrigue, poisonings, lies and murder.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/13/2021 3:59:00 AM
I'm not sure about being a winner, Kim. lol My pen kinda took off in a direction my mind had no intention of going, but it was fun. Thanks!

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