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Sedoku Contest- the Porch Light

The Porch Light It was always on Until we were home at night Only mother turned it out Now my mother gone But I remember the light And what love is all about 1/4/16

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:13:00 PM
barbara, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -
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Date: 1/19/2016 4:04:00 PM
tHIS was one of the very best ones. I remember it so well. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:45:00 AM
BARBARA, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:30:00 AM
Barbara, congrats on your placement in my contest and many thanks for your support *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your memory..Congrats on your recognition as premium member..Gave that to myself as a Christmas present.Sara
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Date: 1/11/2016 5:13:00 PM
Very nice and touching, Barbara.
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:35:00 PM
wow! clever write Barbara
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/5/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much....Appreciate your kind words. BG
Date: 1/5/2016 7:48:00 AM
What a wonderful, warm memory, well encapsulated. Lovely, Barbara. Viv x
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Date: 1/5/2016 2:20:00 AM
Wow lovely Barbara.. best wishes!
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:29:00 PM
Oh YES< now there is a first love poem for ya too!! Awesome little sedoka!!
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Date: 1/4/2016 11:00:00 AM
nice
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