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Security In Jeopardy

The Social Security system Is struggling to find a sound rhythm If Grandpa survives Past Age 65 Will Feds send a posse to kill him? *For Deb's "There once was a man from Dunkirk" limerick contest

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/22/2011 10:10:00 AM

hello Carolyn so good to see you have had a win in the contest, i knew it was a good piece right away.

John Freeman

Date: 1/21/2011 9:05:00 PM

Congratulations Carolyn on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 1/20/2011 8:51:00 PM

Yes this is too cool plus twenty-five. I love it. And on a low note; sorry to say the Fed probably will

Alex Lindsey

Date: 1/20/2011 3:21:00 PM

XD that was great

Daver Austin

Date: 1/20/2011 8:08:00 AM

I wouldn't put it past 'em. And here I am, away past 65. Ooooowwww! This is a real, REAL winner. Love, Dave

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/19/2011 4:04:00 PM

See YOU can hear it!! Mistress of Limerick! now return to your childhood and write one for the kiddies about an animal! Start da DUM da, da DUM da, da DUM da...this time! Light & Love

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/19/2011 3:45:00 PM

No wonder you won with this entry. This is one of the best limericks I have seen on this site so far.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/19/2011 12:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done on this one. Déirdre

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2011 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn, on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/18/2011 8:14:00 PM

Many congratulations for this victory Carolyn. This is real great.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 8:13:00 PM

Perfect, Carolyn. Congratulations!!

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/18/2011 4:37:00 PM

they will no doubt carry out a cost survey before they do, Carolyn so enjoyed this funny write.

James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2011 3:33:00 PM

This still has me laughing Carolyn. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest....:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2011 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations...Sara

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/18/2011 8:11:00 AM

Hi Carolyn - Congratulations on your BIG win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2011 4:27:00 PM

Probably not Carolyn, but what they will do is extend one's working life, from 65 to 70 to get more blood and sweat out of everyone. brilliant Limerick and spot on with the theme. Harry

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 2:13:00 PM

That about sums ageing up Carolyn. We will become a pain in the ass to our Governments. Good luck in Deborah's contest....:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/17/2011 12:26:00 PM

Hi Carolyn. Thanks for the visit. Yes I am really an old romantic. been married to Diane for 37 years and we still walk down the road holding hands. it stops her hitting me. Only Joking. We worked together for years, upholstery,have played music together for years and now that we are retired we spend all our time together. I love this. You are in the U.S.A. I think but this is so appropriate Ireland also. Well versed on a great idea. I remain, romantic, with a twist. eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 11:44:00 AM

I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Carolyn. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/17/2011 9:06:00 AM

LOL! How true. Great limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC

James Peranteau

Date: 1/17/2011 4:47:00 AM

I often thought of this Dear Carolyn ! *smiles* "Are we prime target?" Great entry dear poet ! Have a fantastic day ! And, about the invitation for Noah and the big "D"; it will be some time before our schedual will be open...his schooling, my work. I am looking forward to the meet though ! *smiles* much love, james

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:28:00 AM

Carolyn - Funny poke at Security. Best wishes for contest. Thnx for liking my verse "India Shining" and leaving encouraging comments. yeah i missed the contest. Feeling more bad as could not present India to larger audience. Luv/best wishes always Hitendra Mehta

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 1/16/2011 11:14:00 PM

it is a beautiful limerick

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/16/2011 5:51:00 PM

I love it....so funny and it seems thing might go that way one day. yes the puppy was farting on me like crazy.... I have never seen one fart and I can hear it and they smell awful!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2011 4:34:00 PM

Carolyn I need the first line of Diane Locksley's limerick to find it hon. I sure will help her if I can find it?