Secrets Undressed

dare not gaze into his piercing eyes they read my soul ...secrets undressed ~*~

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Matthew Anish

Date: 1/27/2011 7:37:00 PM

Everyone has some "skeletons in the closet. I enjoyed reading this Monoku

Julie Heckman

Date: 1/24/2011 1:09:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem I wish it was longer so I could read more of your excellent work. Thanks for you generous coment. Julie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2011 11:40:00 PM

this is sexy! how's it going, A!

Kris Walters

Date: 1/23/2011 5:36:00 PM

Secrets exposed- lovely way of expressing this! Nicely done! Thank you for your great comments! Hugs, Kris

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/23/2011 8:24:00 AM

they say the night has a thousand eyes, but only a real soul can see through our inner lens... fascinating, annalise..:) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2011 6:18:00 AM

Sometimes it seems like people can stare right through us. That's why it's wise to harbor no secrets. Quite a thought-provoking monoku, Annalise. Love, Carolyn

Joy Wellington

Date: 1/23/2011 2:17:00 AM

A story in a line. Great!! Blessings, Joy (Jew)

John Rhinem

Date: 1/22/2011 9:43:00 PM

Smile ~ May they never not know that, "Beauty," has graced their world within, "The Treasures of 'Your Beautiful Light!!!'" ~ I hope this also that, "Your Radiances Life," has been going perfectly my dear &, "Yes, 'Another Immaculate Pearl for The Faves'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forevermore,'" John! ~ Smile ~ "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Tomorrow My Dear, Amid 'The Celestials Ever Gazing Eyes of, Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams Dear Annalise;" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 1/22/2011 9:33:00 PM

Smile ~ "This Is One of 'The Most Beautiful' Short Verses I Have Ever Viewed My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Annalise Brigham!!!'" ~ One would only be blessed I do believe if this thus found within, "Your Beauties Eyes," were that of "A Souls Boundless Love Amid The Purest of Such, 'A Beautiful Heart As That Your Own!!!'" ~ Thus, whomever this fortuned Soul may perhaps be then ~ ....Cont:)

Constance La France

Date: 1/22/2011 9:24:00 PM

I love your monoku ~*~ and your symbol, I just might have to steal it!!!!