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Secrets In the City

The traffic flows across the bridge Without me even knowing About the drivers, not a smidge, Or where the heck they’re going. The same applies to passersby, A flock of strangers streaming, Who stroll or jog or scoot, while I, Upon my bench, sit dreaming. The city holds one’s secrets close, Which many find appealing, Though some succumb and overdose On all of that concealing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/5/2021 4:24:00 PM
There’s a choice we make. To live among trees and lawns or live among people. The country can get lonesome whereas people are interesting. But neither situation is safe.
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Date: 5/5/2021 12:08:00 PM
Many secrets are revealed by the face they earned . . . . Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:24:00 AM
I think about those crowds and all those personalities. We never run out of a “universe” of stories.
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Date: 5/4/2021 9:10:00 PM
Well penned, Ilene. I really enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 5/4/2021 3:20:00 PM
What a fun way of saying, you can't judge a book by it's cover. You are too clever, Ilene")
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Date: 5/4/2021 2:51:00 PM
I so enjoy reading your daily poems Ilene you make the ordinary into an extraordinary event:-) hugs an xx
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