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A lady of a certain age whose life you think you really know she lives her life with secrets and some of these appear below On the surface she is brusque and rather bumptious, never smiles but deep inside her broken heart cannot be reconciled Her true love died when she was young, so cruelly taken away He was murdered by a psychopath on a beautiful summer day Could not accept that he had gone her life came to a standstill She built a wall around herself, as her soul cascaded downhill Her bottom drawer was overflowing full of her wedding trousseau So crazed with grief, could not let go, she created a ghoulish tableau The world saw her as a grumpy old dear, living alone; she was no one to fear Down in her cellar an elderly fella, insane, inane, no one knew he was here Imprisoned all those years ago she vowed she’d never let him go, The psychopath he took an axe and killed the man that she’d loved so Each day he survives barely alive; chained like an animal no life in his eyes Each day she watches, no feelings inside, struggling to keep this monster alive Upstairs a body expertly embalmed, her lover, her soulmate, appears unharmed Years go by there’s no solution, for what she has done there will be retribution Now living a life full of secrets and lies, so gruesome she cannot reveal Until her time comes and she joins her beloved, such images she must conceal 25th December 2018 Contest: Secrets Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal 5th placement Jan19 2020 Sponsor: Brian Strand 1st placement Contest: Hello darkness my old friend Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco 4th November 2020

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Date: 11/23/2020 3:43:00 PM
Ann, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2020 4:02:00 PM
Dear Constance thank you so much and I am so pleased you liked it too, although rather gruesome... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/22/2020 2:29:00 PM
What a grueling story you tell through your poem, you had me hooked. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/23/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Joanna so pleased I 'hooked' you dear friend, haha...many thanks. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/22/2020 12:31:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Ann. Superb story! Janice
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/22/2020 12:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice for your lovely comments I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 11/22/2020 8:35:00 AM
Goosebumps! Congratulations on the win Ann! Linda
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/22/2020 11:01:00 AM
Many thanks Linda for your congratulations and I really appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/11/2019 12:52:00 AM
Wow Ann. Such an eerie and lovely poem. Congrats on your top win.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/11/2019 12:58:00 AM
Many thanks for your lovely comment and congrats Line, kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/4/2019 11:10:00 AM
Grisly, that's for sure! Congrats on your win in the contest with this highly imaginative write! :) gw
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/4/2019 11:49:00 AM
Yes you are right Gershon, not really sure where that came from haha! Many thanks for your congrats, kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/29/2018 8:16:00 PM
Hi Ann, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis for your lovely comments. Wishing you a very happy 2019 with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/29/2018 2:24:00 PM
Oops, a strange Aunty lives close to my house and now your poem makes me doubt about the secrets ahe must be hiding with in the threshold of her house, shhh, whatever it is, it is a secret, I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem of yours, it shows that we must not trust anyone, for the false face always hide the truths hidden behind the false heart. Many congratulations on your wonderful win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so much for my win in your competition Faraz, it was fun, even though I did not know this was in me, haha! Wishing you a very happy 2019 with kindest thoughts Ann xx ps beware of the strange Aunty Faraz!!!
Date: 12/25/2018 4:18:00 PM
WoW! Ann, This is a good tale you have spinned. I agree with Jan it reminds of me an Agatha Christie or Alfred Hitchcock novel. An epic tale indeed. I think you've penned your self a winner. You can't judge book by it's cover. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Happy Holiday:-) Alexis
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/25/2018 4:22:00 PM
Oh thank you so much Alexis, though as I said to Jan, I have no idea where it came from. Still, better out than in, methinks! Have a great holiday with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/25/2018 1:52:00 PM
oh my word Ann an epic worthy of an Agatha Christie Novel! such a vivid descriptive poem the ending gave me goosebumps:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/25/2018 3:36:00 PM
Oh dear, hope it's not too much Jan, normally I cannot watch anything remotely violent, so I have no idea where this came from! Maybe too many sherries with my Christmas lunch, haha... Hoping you have had an enjoyable day, with lovely sunshine like we've had in Eastbourne - it was beautiful as I walked along the prom and saw everyone dressed in their Christmassy outfits, including their dogs, whilst the band played jolly songs at the Bandstand. Then I came home and wrote this!!! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

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