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Second Person Point of View.

Hey you there with the bright orange hair Standing there giving me a scare Looking around with that blank stare As if everything was bare.. What are you thinking about? seem like you wouldn't like to talk about all the things that would clear my doubts This just makes me want to shout Look at all these people that are standing around waiting for you to make a sound listening to the you have found then leaving you to stand around

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Date: 8/9/2010 4:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Teddy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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