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Second Marriage (Footle)

Second Marriage First wife gave strife ** for Brian Strand's Footle contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/28/2010 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations Sharon on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Footle Retrospective" Love, Carol

Date: 6/27/2010 2:49:00 PM

Liked this the first time I read it. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2010 10:05:00 PM

and congratulations to you today too, Sharon!! LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/26/2010 3:01:00 PM

hope I don't ever find out!! congrats on the win!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/26/2010 2:11:00 PM

That's what the guy says, anyway!! Great job, Sharon!! Congratulations on your win!! :)

John Freeman

Date: 6/26/2010 12:52:00 PM

A lot of that going around in a lot of people. Congratulation, agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/26/2010 12:17:00 PM

Of course he was just perfect. lol..congrats on your win. ! BG

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/26/2010 11:37:00 AM

Too funny-And I bet it's true! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~

Date: 6/19/2010 2:29:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/18/2010 5:39:00 PM

Very clever, Sharon. A wonderfully witty footle. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

Susan Mills

Date: 6/18/2010 12:16:00 PM

Very nice! Good luck in the contest! Love, Susan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2010 10:59:00 AM

Lol nice one, very funny, enjoyed your write, good luck on the contest...P.D.

James Fraser

Date: 6/18/2010 10:04:00 AM

Nice one Sharon, good luck in Brian's contest >> James

Larry Belt

Date: 6/18/2010 8:33:00 AM

LOL Good one Sharon....Good Luck in the contest.....Larry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2010 8:03:00 AM

Good one, Sharon. I have noticed a lot of people rhyme them this way. I try rhyming both syllalbes when I can. It's amazing how many you can think of! About rondeau, I think it was the French originally who did them only 8 syllables per line, but then I learned you could use ten, and the last two I've posted, I took it even farther and did 12 syllable lines. HOpe to see your "first" baby soon! Luv, andrea