Second Guesses

Perhaps had I chosen another
Instead of the love that I did,
I wouldn't have been left a
Widow so soon and my
Son would not have had
Genetic flaw
That took him
Away
Too.

But ..................if I had chosen another
I would not have had those sweet years
With the love of my young life
Nor have had him either,
My redheaded lad
Or the two girls
Who are so
Dear to
Me. 

Better by far to have loved and lost
Than not to have had them at all.
I wouldn't give up those years
Just to avoid the tears.
The joy was worth
The losing of
My two men.
Husband
Son.

For Linda Marie's contest
(Journey Back In Time.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/7/2010 9:16:00 PM
wow, I love yours, jOyce, one of the best I've read! Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/6/2010 11:54:00 AM
touching poetry, congrats on your win in the contest with this emotional entry
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Date: 10/5/2010 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on your worthy poem's win in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your success in my Nonet contest with this excellent and touching entry.. appreciate your constant support always with luv..
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Date: 9/24/2010 2:04:00 PM
Beautiful write on your love lost Joyce, embracing the sweet memories. Good luck for Linda's contest love Wilma
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Date: 9/24/2010 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Joyce for always having a kind and opened hearted word! Good luck in the contest! Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:36:00 AM
Nice introspective feelings losing the two men loved and lost , Joyce
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:47:00 PM
Im sorry for your loss..but I understand not changing the course of life..you had your love..more than some people ever have. Good poem..BG
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