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Second Chance - Driving Test

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My driving I thought was sublime But I failed my test the first time Staring down at the wheel It was hard to conceal That failure to me was a crime So I applied to take another test Very determined I would try my best I answered every question And I drove to perfection The examiner was very impressed! Second Chance Contest Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron 09~01~16

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Jenni Kalicharan

Date: 9/17/2016 1:32:00 AM

Impressive!!!! Congrats...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2016 6:42:00 PM

Thanks Jenni:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 9/10/2016 12:27:00 PM

Congrats on the win, did you also win the drivers license? :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2016 7:10:00 PM

I got my licence on my second test - the first one was in the UK the next when we moved to the Isle of man:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Arnone

Date: 9/9/2016 10:29:00 AM

I remember doing a perfect parallel park. It's funny. My instructor gave me that trick where you line up the back and front passenger windows with the car in front of the parking spot. And it worked perfectly. Congrats on your win. :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2016 7:09:00 PM

Sounds like you were given good advice Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/7/2016 5:15:00 PM

An extremely important second chance, Jan! Great Limericks, and congrats with your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/7/2016 4:20:00 PM

lol! so cute Jan, as always :)congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/7/2016 4:10:00 PM

Back again to congratulate you on your win :-) Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2016 4:12:00 PM

Many thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 9/7/2016 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations Jan on the placement of the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2016 2:55:00 PM

Many thanks Nayda hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/3/2016 6:50:00 PM

This may be fiction, but failing the first time (driving part) was my reality. Cute little ditty, Jan - much needed after reading so many serious poems in a row ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2016 11:22:00 PM

There are only so many sad poems I can read CayCay - I try and brighten soup with a little humour - 5.21 can't sleep:-( hugs Jan xx

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 9/3/2016 7:10:00 AM

Glad you eventually Passed, goodluck in the contest... #really nice Limerick

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2016 11:21:00 PM

Thanks Abosede:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2016 1:05:00 PM

And I'm impressed with both limericks, Jan:) Good idea for this contest. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2016 2:08:00 PM

Thanks Paul - in part it is true - I failed my test in the UK and simply stopped thinking about driving - then we moved to the Island and I had to learn and I then passed first time here :-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Hoffman

Date: 9/2/2016 7:43:00 AM

LOL. I really love this, especially since it is a limerick. Great poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2016 12:52:00 PM

Thanks Terry I love writing the limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/1/2016 5:27:00 PM

Sounds like me I failed my first test by driving a standard car so practice and more practice before I took it again.lol love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2016 5:33:00 PM

It's well worth the effort in the end Phyllis:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/1/2016 11:58:00 AM

Fun little poem, like the light take on the topic. Good luck on the contest, Jan. Agnes

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2016 12:21:00 PM

Thanks Agnes I like to go for humour if I can:-) thanks you so much for adding your fabulous lines to the collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/1/2016 6:13:00 AM

Very beautiful, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2016 6:18:00 AM

Thanks Jo I was so lucky to pass second time but quite a number of years passed between my first and second tests!:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2016 11:16:00 PM

Another good poem :-) I was lucky I took my test in a small town. Good luck in the contest . Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2016 2:21:00 AM

I passed on my second attempt - first in the UK then the second years later when we moved to the IOM:-) hugs jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/31/2016 8:03:00 PM

I had to go three times for my test @*#@*!...enjoyed the write Jan...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2016 2:20:00 AM

I passed mine second time - first one in the UK I failed and didn't bother again - then when we moved to the Island I needed to drive and passed:-) My driving instructor was fabulous he used to pick me up and I had my young son in the back of the car - use used to read his books and play then fall asleep - he was never a distraction - the instructor said it was rare for him to allow a child to be in the car when someone was learning - my son is very special indeed!:-) hugs Jan xx