Seasons With Snickers

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               Free download Dachshund Puppis Pictures Longhaired Dachshund dog ...

She is a lifeline in the blue-black of days
Curled on my lap, her sausage form rolls
All over the bed ... without guilt, without care;

Weenie girl Snickers likes to frolic 
In dim of night as  my tiredness kicks in,
And I would fondly grant a regalement

To hide seek among boxes, messed closets
While those almond eyes peer kindly
Much like watchful gazes as I leave by dawn:

My tiny keeper-- we  would romp, laugh wildly
Along Saturday fields...our picnic hideaway
Her limbs guiding me from thorns of work's fatigue.

~

 Lavish mealtimes, Snicks would evade
          She grew weak though paws jumped around
        Clinging tighter, sweeter than dachsund licks;

 Then... on fateful one noon, she simply heaved her last
          Wink of dachshund eyes locked upon mine ,
       The rain tears tapping, d r i f t i n g   on my bosom  --

  Reveries of us brought raw pain, immeasurable joy
         You, not a heartbeat far from my soul
     That I rocked you where our Saturday fields rested. Ever.
                       
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                            ))




All Dogs Go To Heaven Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France  8/19/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/31/2020 9:41:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my All Pets Go To Heaven Challenge with this emotional write, I know this pain is still new for you but time will heal your heart and hopefully one day a new pet will enter, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 8/25/2020 4:39:00 AM
- A beautiful but sad poem, Nette ... congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2020 4:15:00 PM
I can not wait to see all of my dogs again. Congrats to you, this poem is one of the favorites I have read from this contest.
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Date: 8/24/2020 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Nette. Beautiful poetic phrases "not a heartbeat far from my soul." Our Wheaten Terrier before Ted was named Snickers. She was a character.
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Date: 8/20/2020 3:51:00 PM
wow, Nette. I just LOVE this. I think you might know, our dog is also named Snickers. I think he is around five years old now so hopefully he has a number of years left in him. Must have been so hard for you to see him go. Constance will just love this one. FAVE
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Date: 8/19/2020 11:02:00 AM
Such a heartbreaking experience to lose a beloved pet, but there not just a pet, they become part of the family. Tom
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Date: 8/19/2020 10:38:00 AM
Oh Nette, you brought tears to my eyes, I have a weenie dog and he's name is Snickers, actually my sister named him Snicker Doodle, but what a wonderful expression of an unbroken bond. Good luck in the contest. DMB
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