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Oak no longer wears verdant cape Which clings to each branch rotund shape Upon each branch in shapely pairs Verdant cape oak no longer wears A tinge of frost, lands and touches 'Pon summer's nests, but gone the clutches Who hatched and left before they're lost Lands and touches a tinge of frost Russet colors adorn those leaves Large in number, but naught achieves Winds blow them away they're airborne Those leaves russet color adorns Bare limbs exposed, skeletal oak Chilled by northerly wind uncloak Hope in spring? I truly supposed Skeletal oak, bare limbs exposed
Sponsor: Emile Pinet Contest: Swap Quatrain Date: 09-21-2022 First time doing one of these. Not so easy. I used rhyme zone. Syllable counter.net. On some I could not figure out how to have only 8 syllables. Going to check with Grammer checker also.

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Date: 10/19/2022 8:58:00 PM
Swap quatrain is not an easy form. Still you have done your best. All the Best in the contest, dear Sara !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/20/2022 6:14:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I agree with you it was not so easy to write. LOL..Sara
Date: 9/24/2022 10:40:00 AM
I loved the imagery in this poem... It perfectly captures the feeling of autumn, my favorite season... Fantastic work, Sara! Best wishes for the contest!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/24/2022 1:07:00 PM
Kelly, Why, thank you. I appreciate you reading my work and taking time to comment. Sara
Date: 9/22/2022 6:06:00 AM
Well composed season of change, Sara. Best to you.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 9/22/2022 1:24:00 AM
Splendid autumn poem. Best for a win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2022 5:04:00 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. Sara
Date: 9/21/2022 8:22:00 PM
Verdant cape, bare limbs exposed…very nice, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2022 3:28:00 AM
Kim, Thanks for the kind review. Sara
Date: 9/21/2022 7:09:00 PM
Love the classical meter, the elegance, the feel and texture of this gem. Thanks, Sara. ~ Autumnal Splendor! :) gw
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/22/2022 3:26:00 AM
Why, thank you, Gershon. Soon, very soon we will see some color if everything is just right. Your visit uplifting. Sara
Date: 9/21/2022 3:13:00 PM
Yes, i see several lines w/ 9, but plenty of opportunities to trim without losing flow - keep at it; I like it!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/21/2022 5:01:00 PM
Why, thank you, Jeff for the help. Sara

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