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Seasons Change

Petals yielding color to autumn’s panting breaths, red lips brown-smudged by chill kisses of lust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/24/2017 10:44:00 PM
Hi Bernard, such poetic bliss here in your lines of beautiful expression. I enjoyed your cinquain very much! :)
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Bernard Chan
Date: 8/24/2017 11:40:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Susan :)
Date: 8/23/2017 9:08:00 AM
Well done Bernard :)
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Bernard Chan
Date: 8/23/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi :)
Date: 8/16/2017 9:03:00 PM
Very cool form image, wording and contrast. Great short poem!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 8/17/2017 7:55:00 AM
Thank you, Ronald!

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