Seasons Promise

Trees stand silently and bare
Yet in their silence dwells  the hope of spring
Though  winter keeps  them in  its  icy glare

Desolate landscapes  bare the scars of winter's sting
 And hardly a creature utters  a sound
 Yet in their silence dwells the hope of spring

Days are  bleak with gray skies all around
While icicles  hang from window sills
 And hardly  a creature utters a sound

As life stands  still in winter's chill
Those sunny days  are hard to find
While  icicles hang from window sills

Cold winds blow with storms that blind
But the hope of spring does not decline
Though  sunny days are  hard to find

As weary creatures look for a sign
Trees stand silently and bare 
But the hope of spring does not decline
Though winter keeps them in its icy glare
                                 ~~
  Written on: 11/11/ 2012 
 Contest Judged On: 4/30/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/15/2019 8:56:00 AM
A great poem you have written Joseph. Congratulations :)
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on your great win, Joseph!
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:35:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:49:00 AM
this is a lovely win
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:12:00 PM
this is a very well written one, Joseph!! I love it. Congratulations again!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:47:00 PM
This is terrific, Joseph. Congratulations and well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:43:00 PM
Great imagery!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:22:00 PM
Congrad's on your win keep up the good work! Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:44:00 PM
many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:16:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve * @-)--< 7
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Date: 6/23/2015 12:18:00 PM
delightful winter poem Joseph congrats on your win Hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 6/24/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Shadow ...Hugs
Date: 1/31/2014 7:41:00 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Joseph
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:01:00 PM
Terzanelle's are difficult to write and this one is a beauty and so deserving of winning. Congratulations on your wonderful win Joseph!
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Date: 1/30/2014 1:28:00 PM
well written...this reminds me of staring out the window by where I live. Congrats on the win:) mandi
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:46:00 PM
This was such a great poem to enter in the contest. Congrats on your very well deserved win , joseph.
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:41:00 AM
I just loved this poem Joseph, Congrats on your win....Roger
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Date: 1/28/2014 1:11:00 PM
JOSEPH, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
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Joseph May
Date: 1/28/2014 6:27:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Skat...hugs
Date: 11/30/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Hope" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my friend, Joseph May! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/19/2012 9:37:00 PM
As I reread yours, I realized just how wonderfully you did with the theme and the form. this is my favorite I think. There is something so awesome about it. A fave.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:01:00 PM
thanks for those kind words Andrea...I appreciate it
Date: 11/19/2012 2:55:00 PM
Joseph.. congratulations with your wonderful win in Craig's contest... always~ PD
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:04:00 PM
thank you PD
Date: 11/19/2012 9:43:00 AM
Great write! Congratulations on your win my dear friend! love/hugs, LG
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:03:00 PM
thank you Leonora
Date: 11/18/2012 6:52:00 PM
We are so lucky we can comprehend it is only a matter of time! Congrad's on your win in this difficult contest. Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:03:00 PM
thanks Debbie
Date: 11/18/2012 6:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:04:00 PM
thanks Sara
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