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Trees stand silently and bare Yet in their silence dwells the hope of spring Though winter keeps them in its icy glare Desolate landscapes bare the scars of winter's sting And hardly a creature utters a sound Yet in their silence dwells the hope of spring Days are bleak with gray skies all around While icicles hang from window sills And hardly a creature utters a sound As life stands still in winter's chill Those sunny days are hard to find While icicles hang from window sills Cold winds blow with storms that blind But the hope of spring does not decline Though sunny days are hard to find As weary creatures look for a sign Trees stand silently and bare But the hope of spring does not decline Though winter keeps them in its icy glare ~~ Written on: 11/11/ 2012 Contest Judged On: 4/30/16

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Date: 5/15/2019 8:56:00 AM
A great poem you have written Joseph. Congratulations :)
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on your great win, Joseph!
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:35:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:49:00 AM
this is a lovely win
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:12:00 PM
this is a very well written one, Joseph!! I love it. Congratulations again!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:47:00 PM
This is terrific, Joseph. Congratulations and well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:43:00 PM
Great imagery!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:22:00 PM
Congrad's on your win keep up the good work! Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:44:00 PM
many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:16:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve * @-)--< 7
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Date: 6/23/2015 12:18:00 PM
delightful winter poem Joseph congrats on your win Hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 6/24/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Shadow ...Hugs
Date: 1/31/2014 7:41:00 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Joseph
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:01:00 PM
Terzanelle's are difficult to write and this one is a beauty and so deserving of winning. Congratulations on your wonderful win Joseph!
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Date: 1/30/2014 1:28:00 PM
well written...this reminds me of staring out the window by where I live. Congrats on the win:) mandi
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:46:00 PM
This was such a great poem to enter in the contest. Congrats on your very well deserved win , joseph.
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:41:00 AM
I just loved this poem Joseph, Congrats on your win....Roger
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Date: 1/28/2014 1:11:00 PM
JOSEPH, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
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Joseph May
Date: 1/28/2014 6:27:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Skat...hugs
Date: 11/30/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Hope" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my friend, Joseph May! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/19/2012 9:37:00 PM
As I reread yours, I realized just how wonderfully you did with the theme and the form. this is my favorite I think. There is something so awesome about it. A fave.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:01:00 PM
thanks for those kind words Andrea...I appreciate it
Date: 11/19/2012 2:55:00 PM
Joseph.. congratulations with your wonderful win in Craig's contest... always~ PD
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:04:00 PM
thank you PD
Date: 11/19/2012 9:43:00 AM
Great write! Congratulations on your win my dear friend! love/hugs, LG
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:03:00 PM
thank you Leonora
Date: 11/18/2012 6:52:00 PM
We are so lucky we can comprehend it is only a matter of time! Congrad's on your win in this difficult contest. Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:03:00 PM
thanks Debbie
Date: 11/18/2012 6:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 6:04:00 PM
thanks Sara
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