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Seasons

Seasons Autumn with rustling red and brittle brown, Time weighing heavily as honey oozes; Or as silently as the sun goes down With no birds singing as all nature closes. Winter with gritty grey and creaseless white, Time freezing smoothly as iron pressing; Or as stretched as the morning’s sunlight With sad flowers and fresh blossom dying. Summer with prickly green and crisp yellow, Time endless as a rail track distancing; As long as a slow burning tallow With undergrowth and bursting weeds surging. But spring with cruel growth and fragile rain, Harmonises nature with its refrain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/14/2017 2:31:00 PM
Big smile from me, Brian. : ) Makes me feel like laughing and crying at the same time. For me, the seasons are one of the best things about being alive.
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Brian Duffield
Date: 4/14/2017 2:53:00 PM
You're right Doug ...the seasons connect with our emotional life..I don't know why but every time something important happens Imagination always gravitates towards nature regards
Date: 4/14/2017 7:30:00 AM
Great work Brian, wonderfully capturing the color and nature of each season. I like this one a lot...
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Brian Duffield
Date: 4/14/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Charlie I was trying to use mixed sensory words-touch/colour to suggest elements of each season. Copying my hero Keats in that technique!! Regards
Date: 4/14/2017 6:13:00 AM
Brian, this beautiful poem chants the passing of time in deeper, wise tones. I loved the "Winter gritty grey and creaseless white", that's where I'm heading, and I have no regret about "spring with cruel growth and fragile rain":) Amitiés
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Brian Duffield
Date: 4/14/2017 10:30:00 AM
Thank you your comments. Love exploring nature to write about the experiences we all share.

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