Seasons

Poetry is like a river Always changing currents Soft, wild, always demanding attention. October sun fading Blowing thru golden hair Windswept streaks on a face. Never a green leaf whispers As the sweet smelling flowers drift Deep into the heart of summer. I saw spring today Was an awesome sight Heaven was open to me. 3/ 5/ 2013 Tues

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/29/2014 8:26:00 AM

Awesome! So Awesome... Poems like this make me wonder if this site will increase the ratings to 10.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/25/2014 4:41:00 PM

this is really beautiful : )

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/20/2014 10:57:00 PM

Nice - a couple of them are really haikus since they are about nature. Good use of this Asian form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/16/2014 5:25:00 PM

Enjoyed this uplifting piece Debbie thanks for the visit..'

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/29/2014 4:30:00 PM

This is a great poem Debbie. I am so glad that spring is here. Thanks and enjoy the season... Lucilla

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/29/2014 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla , spring is around the corner :)

Skat A

Date: 3/5/2014 10:33:00 PM

a wonderful flowing poem.... Beautiful Debbie..... SKAT

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/16/2014 8:54:00 AM

Sounds like your on a tributary journey having read Dukes comment. Hope all is going well and that you find some time to enjoy a write or two. We await the breeze to blow your golden hues our way again. Peace. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2014 9:29:00 PM

Hi, sweetie, I sure hope you will back here in full force soon with lots of new poems.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2014 3:03:00 PM

Nice way to describe spring. I can't wait for it; especially after the snow storm we received yesterday.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/12/2014 4:40:00 PM

this is beautiful

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/12/2014 4:26:00 PM

Good luck on your training and doing. You have the sensitivity and empathy to be a wonderful counselor. And yes, it is hard to write a lot when we are busy with other parts of our lives. I wish you the best in this endeavor. You will make the world a better place.

Peter Dome

Date: 1/11/2014 2:49:00 AM

Wow this is beautiful. love the bit about the hai streaks and nature. very well done. A real pleasure to read. Pete.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/8/2014 6:43:00 PM

They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder, well you've beheld beauty and written about it thus i loved your write here lady, thank you for your wonderful comment on my queen mary she was and always will be a lady to all that have seen her majesty ship. cheri

Karen Anglesey

Date: 1/1/2014 10:44:00 PM

You haven't posted in a while. Refreshing poem! Hope everything is okay ")

Jack Horne

Date: 1/1/2014 1:45:00 PM

love these senryu. my friend

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/1/2014 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Jack , Happy New Year to you :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/1/2014 12:41:00 PM

Debbie, I guess spring will always be in your heart! I apologize for being away for a while. I can't explain my absence except to say that I have been consumed with outside matters and have neglected my poetic partition. It is funny how that works. Best of experiences going forward to you.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/30/2013 8:03:00 PM

Poetry is an ever changing river depending on our moods. Well said in this poem. Wishing you a very Happy New Years. I hope to have more time on here in the coming new year. love phyl

Roger Horsch

Date: 12/30/2013 10:14:00 AM

Hello Debbie, It is always a wonderful time when I visit an read your poetry. I also have a poem called Seasons. And that is what drew my attention to this beautiful poem...Hugs...Roger

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/26/2013 6:42:00 PM

I agree, Debbie, our poetry is always changing with the seasons and with our moods. It does capture our attention and never lets it go! I really enjoyed this poem from you. It was very well expressed. Beautiful work!....Thank you so much for the kind comments! I hope that you had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2013 2:27:00 AM

- Happy Christmas - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 12:37:00 AM

Debbie, , Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/23/2013 10:50:00 PM

Simply beautiful!!!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/23/2013 6:42:00 PM

Merry Christmas, Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2013 12:54:00 AM

reading this one again, I sure do enjoy the imagery in these!!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/22/2013 10:02:00 PM

Amazingly beautiful. You have captured the mood and beauty of nature in it's touching colors in this sweet lovely Poem so nicely that one feels only to get lost in this beauty Debbie. Like Nature your Poem has fascinated me a lot. Thank you for this lovely read and for appreciating my Mulberry Poem. I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy new year for 2014. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor