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Poetic Form: Tanka

Inspired: 2023 December 02

Image: N/A

seasons arrested a sauntering airs freely a mass of escapes panoramic difference relocation picturesque

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/3/2023 7:18:00 AM

Changes in the air, changes in location - changes is not all bad. :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/3/2023 7:49:00 AM

Subtlties of the heart--necessitates, Linda. Aloha, William

Paige Hind

Date: 12/2/2023 4:35:00 PM

Deep and original... enjoyed it!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/2/2023 5:46:00 PM

Non au compare, mon amie--appreciated. Aloha, William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2023 1:04:00 PM

- We have a lot of "air of freedom", William :) - Great written :) - hugs

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/2/2023 2:40:00 PM

I think we got that here too, lol, Anne-Lise. Aoha, William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2023 11:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your work. I am wondering if it has anything to do with the island/s in Hawaii since the fire? Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/2/2023 12:14:00 PM

Again abt Maui where the fire was ... one time a freak event happened when their 10k mtn had snow falling, a wind storm had shifted the positioning and caused it to fall down on one side of it, voila, snow on the beach, remember that snowman pic I had on my Lanterne 'Standard Issue', yep, weird happens sometimes--take me for instance.lol. Aloha, William