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Poetic Form: Tanka

Inspired: 2023 December 02

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seasonals

seasons arrested
a sauntering airs freely 
a mass of escapes
panoramic difference
relocation picturesque

allusionanalogyautumnchangespringtanka

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Linda Alice Fowler

December 3, 2023 at 7:18 AM

Changes in the air, changes in location - changes is not all bad. :)

William Kelii Kekaula

December 3, 2023 at 7:49 AM

Subtlties of the heart--necessitates, Linda. Aloha, William

Paige Hind

December 2, 2023 at 4:35 PM

Deep and original... enjoyed it!

William Kelii Kekaula

December 2, 2023 at 5:46 PM

Non au compare, mon amie--appreciated. Aloha, William

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 2, 2023 at 1:04 PM

- We have a lot of "air of freedom", William :) - Great written :) - hugs

William Kelii Kekaula

December 2, 2023 at 2:40 PM

I think we got that here too, lol, Anne-Lise. Aoha, William

Sara Kendrick

December 2, 2023 at 11:57 AM

I enjoyed reading your work. I am wondering if it has anything to do with the island/s in Hawaii since the fire? Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

William Kelii Kekaula

December 2, 2023 at 12:14 PM

Again abt Maui where the fire was ... one time a freak event happened when their 10k mtn had snow falling, a wind storm had shifted the positioning and caused it to fall down on one side of it, voila, snow on the beach, remember that snowman pic I had on my Lanterne 'Standard Issue', yep, weird happens sometimes--take me for instance.lol. Aloha, William

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