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Seaside Turn

ocean's face swells after surf's passed — new sheer water - Written especially for Kim Rodrigues' contest prompt- "Than-Bauk Variation" to be written with her own unique style of the form.- :)

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Date: 9/23/2024 12:05:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 9/22/2024 12:12:00 PM
Back with my congrats.loved your imagery
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:33:00 PM
Dear sweet paige! Its so good to see you doing contests, and this is a beautiful and unique one for the form! Well woven and delivered! Pleasure reading this! I love the ocean! So this one stands out! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/18/2024 3:36:00 PM
Thank you everyone that congratulated me! :)
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Date: 9/18/2024 9:29:00 AM
well-done, Paige. The imagery is clear.
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Date: 9/17/2024 10:04:00 PM
congratulations dear poet.
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Date: 9/17/2024 5:32:00 PM
Lovely, Paige! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/12/2024 9:15:00 PM
Yes. I had seen it Gosh I did not know how much you were into this form.
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Date: 9/7/2024 11:02:00 AM
Well done, dear
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Date: 9/3/2024 1:32:00 PM
Nicely done..
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Date: 9/2/2024 8:25:00 PM
the transformative vibe of water amazes me,paige...lovely write!
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Date: 9/2/2024 2:31:00 AM
An image to be remembered. Wonderful.
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Date: 8/31/2024 4:24:00 PM
I can see this image. It does describe a phase of ocean bounty. Nicely done
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