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Searching For You

As I made my way through the shadowy forest of doubt,
I had the most unusual dreamlike thoughts.
I stared trancelike when a herd of unicorns approached,
led by a surreal Mad Hatter seeking Alice.
In the hazy early morning light on a trail we’d traveled often,
I paused to blink, knowing the visions were ethereal.
Unicorns?  Please, this herd looked like something from a fairytale,
and I wondered if they could be anything but imaginary.
Then a familiar voice I heard.  It was yours, my love.
You reminded me to enjoy the moment, not to think so hard.
Real or unreal, it was a vision brewed by an active imagination,
one that will not rest until I find my way back to you.




*May 24, 2021
For Constance La France’s “Dreamlike” Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goff Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Miss our long talks, much love, jamesy
Loving Iii Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 12:17 PM
You were one of my closest friends here. Rest in peace. See you when I get there. John H Loving III
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Rest in Peace Carolyn, love Constance
Kapoor Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 7:44 AM
Missing you is like missing a true friend and a great poet, who used to write with boldness and beauty of its own. We had long associations on PS since 2010 perhaps dear Carolyn. We have lost you now forever, but your poetry would for ever and ever with same warmth and love as you wrote them. May your soul dear friend rest in eternal peace for ever...... Ravindra K Kapoor
Kapoor Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Missing you is like missing a true friend and a great poet, who used to write with boldness and beauty of its own. We had long associations on PS since 2010 perhaps dear Carolyn. We have lost you now forever, but your poetry would for ever and ever with same warmth and love as you wrote them. May your soul dear friend rest in eternal peace for ever...... Ravindra K Kapoor
Chircop Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 8:38 AM
On the 3rd of August 2021 you flew up high to the land of no tears..Always close to heart Dear Carolyn xx
Loving Iii Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 2:08 PM
I still miss what we had here. We were very attached so much so that I still feel the loss of you. We never met here on Earth but I'm sure in heaven You'll come up to me and say your name and I'll go crazy. So I use this moment to tell the soupers that read this. I love you Carolyn.
La France Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Carolyn, I was thinking about you today. I miss you very much. I guess God needed another angel, but why did he have to take you? You took a piece of my heart with you when you died and thanks for leaving us your poetry to treasure. I am so happy that your last poem written was for my contest, rest in peace, dear friend, Constance
Loving Iii Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:27 PM
Yes, you can say I'm searching for you.
Maverick Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 2:18 PM
So imaginative, and rich in imagery an Outstanding piece to enjoy '
Chircop Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Searching for you this Christmas Dear Friend.Happy Christmas in Heaven.
Goff Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Thinking of you at Xmas, love, Jim
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 9:08 AM
I'm sure you found your way back to the one and joined him in eternal peace Dear Carolyn.How I regret that we didn't manage to meet face to face in this world my good friend.Hopefully I see you in the Better one.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Aww nooh you will be missed, will miss your lovely poems and positive comments soo much. So sad to hear , RIP dear friend.
Liguori Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 1:59 PM
Rest in Peace.
Horne Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Just dropping by to send you my love. I miss you, hon xxx
George   Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Dear Carolyn, My friend, my mentor...you will remain in my heart forever. Love you so dearly.
Goff Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Miss you
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:52 AM
I've never not believed in unicorns, ever since I was a kid :)
Byrne Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 10:26 PM
I was so sad to learn of your demise Carolyn. I write this as if you can read it, your comments on my work over the years were so heartwarming and encouraging. I am saddened by your departure but also gladdened to have been privileged to have known and interacted with you. You made this world a more wonderful place to be while you were here in it. RIP dear Carolyn :)
Star Child Nebula Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Rip my dear writer and community friend. May your words echoe in our heart to appreciate all the beauty that surrounds. Look down and smile to see how dearly missed you are amongst us all at PoetrySoup.
Chapin Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 9:16 PM
Rest in peace. May God always bless you up above; as you journey through the high land set out for you. May the unicorns walk gracefully with you upon your heavenly journey.
Makama Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 6:58 PM
Rest in peace Carolyn.
Kaufman Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 2:06 PM
Dear Carolyn, I am just now enjoying your tremendous talent and rich poetic legacy. Just like your recent acrostic poem Sunflowers, you have "left a lasting impression". May you rest in peace and know that you were well loved and appreciated. Thank you, Nancy Kaufman
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August 8, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Rest in Peace dear Carolyn. May your lovely poetry be eternal.
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