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Searching a Beautiful Life

Patience dies when strength of mind dies Love dies when it demises Care dies when sacrifice dies Destination dies when duty dies Being dies when body dies Die dies when itself dies but wants to survive searching a beautiful life SOUL never dies

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/20/2011 11:50:00 AM

I think the progression of patience-love-care-destination-being-dying-and then the soul never dying is a great one...our lives our as a vapor! Here today and gone tomorrow. Our souls,.....that's another story, right? Enjoyed. Gwendolen

Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 12/18/2011 9:41:00 PM

Uh, I have a question if you're searching for a beautiful life, how come your poem sounds very negative? So you're saying that the person died? Love is not only by attraction, love is to make a person happy and when it's okay for him/her to find his/her life to be happy, that is love. Love is when you know the other person's true self and acceptance also ties with love. I hope I can help you.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/20/2011 8:09:00 AM

Thanks God without word............

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/19/2011 10:43:00 AM

My lovely friend, i agree with you without any doubt...... Thanks, bl