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Seagull Semantics

Fair wind floating above a sparkly sea as the pounding surf grinds sand over there, I then feel hunger to a large degree, sense some morsels near, beat my wings on air. As the pounding surf grinds sand over there, I fly, knowing fellow hunters will feast, sense some morsels near, beat my wings on air, then hover, tuck, and dive in from the east. I fly, knowing fellow hunters will feast, will swoop and swoon for every scrap of food, then hover, tuck, and dive in from the east, attacking dinner with some attitude, will swoop and swoon for every scrap of food, and leave naught behind but sand, sky and brine. Attacking dinner with some attitude, squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine and leave naught behind but sand, sky and brine; I then feel hunger to a large degree. Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine, fair wind floating above a sparkly sea. November 26, 2019 Seagulls contest by Eve Roper

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/21/2019 11:51:00 AM

This is brilliant Greg. Congratulations on your first Pantoum winning first place. I have never written one because they are too much of a challenge. Mele Kalikimaka!

Greg Hladky
Date: 12/21/2019 1:42:00 PM

Thanks, Connie. Appreciate that. Hope you have a palm tree swaying merry Christmas, too!

Na Na

Date: 12/20/2019 1:58:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Greg

Greg Hladky
Date: 12/20/2019 11:10:00 PM

Thanks! My first 1st place win! I'm happy to share that with so many other winning poems. And congrats to you, too!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/4/2019 12:34:00 AM

Great pantoum. Not easy to do, but you have done a fine job!

Greg Hladky
Date: 12/4/2019 1:50:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. It was a fun challenge!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2019 9:52:00 AM

The great thing about poetry is that it can provide us a bird’s eye view.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2019 9:33:00 AM

Great use of personification. I enjoyed your Pantoum. You did this really well.

Greg Hladky
Date: 11/27/2019 11:23:00 AM

Thanks, Richard. Glad you enjoyed it. As an aviator I'm envious of the seagull's skill and freedom in flight. Wish I could fly like that! This poem gave me the freedom to do just that.

Na Na

Date: 11/26/2019 1:06:00 AM

Hi Greg well done my friend. It took me awhile to figure this style out but I finally figured it out. Looks like you have done these ones many times. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing

Greg Hladky
Date: 11/26/2019 1:24:00 AM

Thanks, that's very kind. This actually is my first attempt at a pantoum, but I do have some familiarity with the subject. I watched seagulls closely on many trips to the beach.