Sea Therapy

Glowing orange, cloud coals burn
reflections into low tide evening surf,
slap lapping against scattered shells,
ripe fruits for hungry sea tramp's picking.
Itinerant thoughts, aimless as seaweed drift,
scatter like bands of sandpiper strays
on endless quest for burrowing crabs.
Peace rolling off the water, a liquid aura,
brings surcease to the day's anxious plight.
Cavorting light rays pirouette in prismatic play,
unfettered children of earth's weary sun
who slips to rest upon night's graying breast.

Carefree scenes surround, seashore treats,
delectable as holiday sweets displayed on Christmas Eve:
ribbon candy colored cabanas,
verdigris beach poles rope garlanded,
soft stained seashell ornament display.
Almost as good as Christmas, this evening on the beach,
stretched out upon the sand
my back against bleached driftwood band.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, January 31, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Faye, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
Jerden Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Like watching a movie in your mind. Nothing beats a sunset on the beach. Congratulations, Faye!
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Faye, Congrats on your "Sea Shore win." LINDA
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:38 PM
Hi Faye. Congrats on your great placement. Well done my friend. I spent many a day on the pacific shores of S.F.,Ca. I miss it. Your write was refreshing.
Callus Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 5:28 AM
I love the captivating imagery, Faye; a delightful appeal to the senses makes this a worthy top winning poem...congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:13 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Faye.. exquisite work..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 1:44 AM
This is outstanding Faye! The lines that stand out for me most are the last two in the first stanza. Congratulations on a most deserved win of first place. Brava!
Wigley Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Lovely write, Faye, full of colour, and I love the alliteration. A worthy win, well done. Viv x
Gentry Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations on your win! Awesome!
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 7:23 PM
This is such a sublime, descriptive poem, filled with imaginative imagery, Faye! Congrats on your tip top win :)
George   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Wonderful, vivid free verse, Faye. Many congrats on your first place win. Elaine
Parker Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations on your top placement
Scars Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Faye, congrats on your top placement in the contest!! -luloo *smiles*
Haight Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Hi Faye, congratulations on your top of the podium win! Wonderful imagery. Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:05 PM
This is wonderful, Faye!! I love the comparison, and gorgeous wordings ! Hooray for you!
Adams Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 7:17 PM
great use of vivid imagery, it sets the scene up beautifully! Nicely penned :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Faye, stunning lines.. =`) wow!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Leiser Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 12:52 AM
Amazing imagery that brings me into the moment. So creatively written! Loved this great write :)
Delaney Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Enjoyed your poem like therapy. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
Davey Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Very descriptiive i can picture it all in my mind beautifully
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