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She is the fish-maiden of the night, a temptress that croons to the sky wading on gills of fondled thoughts, the bearer of one fine shipmate’s doom coasting on forbidden passion and trance. On waters’ edge before the stars pale, her body swivels before an ensnared time of charmed maneuver , a hesitant prowl; till the gentle fondness weeps a lonely desire. Laying her man on the crib of soft navel an aching dusk breaks a mermaid's tune ; his breath gasping against the shore while she clings to a howling wind, pleading for rescue into deep cave of moss. Suzanne Delaney's Mermaids new poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 8/17/2014 10:29:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!!! A very fine write and a pleasure to read!
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Date: 6/17/2014 11:00:00 AM
beautiful... this has mystery, elegance, pop and danger and really sings... you're a poet I would like to keep track of michael
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Date: 6/3/2014 7:32:00 PM
I loved this one! Excellent! Passionate and delicate!!!
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Date: 6/3/2014 4:11:00 PM
I think you have scored with this one. Mermaid legends are fascinating and you capture that fascination well with your words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/3/2014 11:20:00 AM
Very heavy write nette! had to read it a number of times--- this is good! :-) To my faves! Always~~Keith
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Date: 6/2/2014 9:44:00 PM
My friend this is a very strong write for the contest. Best of luck!!!!! BBravo!!!!
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Date: 6/2/2014 6:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your original work of art with this enchanting poem that reveals your wonderful imagination Nette. A lovely entry for the contest.
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Date: 6/2/2014 4:01:00 PM
Reads like a winner if for a contest..I have seen several with mermaid or mermaids in them so must be a contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/2/2014 2:13:00 PM
Good thing I caught this. Fantastic arrangement portraying a blend of love and captivity. Very intense poem.
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Date: 6/2/2014 12:53:00 PM
Hi Nette, I just finished reading many of your works. You create very strong images and interesting language structures for easy fun reading. I like the stories that they tell. Sea Temptress has a very nice relaxing mood and message.. Keep up the great work. Have a great day. Earl
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