Tania Kitchin Poet Lay

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Sea Storm

Ocean waves crash along the shore
Dark clouds warning, a storm in store
Gulls soar searching for washed up food
As crabs seek cover with their brood
Sandpipers nesting in the brush
As waves rise and crash with a gush
A beacon light illuminates
Warning as the storm dominates

3/30/22

Contest: Form L- Lay -New Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

Theme: Nature
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Gary Radice May 29, 2022 at 10:15 AM I echo what Valsa has said - I, too, love reading poems about the sea. I can almost hear the crashing of the waves and breathing in the pre-storm air. Lovely work. Cheers - Gary Tania Kitchin May 29, 2022 at 1:49 PM Thank you Gary!

Valsa George April 18, 2022 at 9:15 PM A beautiful poem on the sea and seascape . Love reading about sea and being close to a sea....! Well deserved win, Tania Tania Kitchin April 19, 2022 at 3:48 AM Thank you Valsa!

Constance La France April 8, 2022 at 1:37 PM Tania, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance Tania Kitchin April 8, 2022 at 2:30 PM Thank you Constance!

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2022 at 3:14 PM Congrats on this winner. I really enjoyed reading this one that reminds me of the beach, ocean, and all that goes on there. Sara Tania Kitchin April 7, 2022 at 4:39 PM Thank you Sara!

Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2022 at 9:41 AM I love this, Tania! The storm, the imagery and all! Congratulations! Tania Kitchin April 6, 2022 at 3:31 AM Thank you Kim!

Christuraj Alex April 4, 2022 at 6:58 AM A thrilling narration that continues in the mind for long. Congratulations! Tania Kitchin April 4, 2022 at 4:03 PM Thank you!

Valsa George March 31, 2022 at 10:05 PM Beautiful seascape in all its variety and loveliness ! But the foreboding storm shows its unpredictability as it is a metaphor for life ! Great poem, Tania ! Tania Kitchin April 1, 2022 at 4:00 AM Thank you Valsa!

Victor Buhagiar March 31, 2022 at 12:56 AM I love poems about the sea. Great imagery and wish you a best for a win. Hugs. Tania Kitchin March 31, 2022 at 3:44 AM Thank you Victor! hugs

Susan Ashley March 30, 2022 at 12:29 PM Incredible imagery, Tania. So lively with Nature’s energy and stormy foreboding. Splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Tania Kitchin March 30, 2022 at 4:27 PM Thank you Susan!

Paulette Calasibetta March 30, 2022 at 12:20 PM Fabulous imagery~ I can hear the gulls cries and squawks for food~Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette Tania Kitchin March 30, 2022 at 4:27 PM Thank you Paulette!

Jenna Logan March 30, 2022 at 12:14 PM Oh goodness, Tania. Your Lay lines are wonderful, and a better photo could not have been found. soup mail Tania Kitchin March 30, 2022 at 4:27 PM Thank you Jenna!