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Ocean waves crash along the shore Dark clouds warning, a storm in store Gulls soar searching for washed up food As crabs seek cover with their brood Sandpipers nesting in the brush As waves rise and crash with a gush A beacon light illuminates Warning as the storm dominates 3/30/22 Contest: Form L- Lay -New Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Theme: Nature ( checked with howmanysyllables.com)

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Gary Radice

Date: 5/29/2022 10:15:00 AM

I echo what Valsa has said - I, too, love reading poems about the sea. I can almost hear the crashing of the waves and breathing in the pre-storm air. Lovely work. Cheers - Gary

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2022 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Gary!

Valsa George

Date: 4/18/2022 9:15:00 PM

A beautiful poem on the sea and seascape . Love reading about sea and being close to a sea....! Well deserved win, Tania

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2022 3:48:00 AM

Thank you Valsa!

Constance La France

Date: 4/8/2022 1:37:00 PM

Tania, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/8/2022 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Constance!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2022 3:14:00 PM

Congrats on this winner. I really enjoyed reading this one that reminds me of the beach, ocean, and all that goes on there. Sara

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/7/2022 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Sara!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/5/2022 9:41:00 AM

I love this, Tania! The storm, the imagery and all! Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/6/2022 3:31:00 AM

Thank you Kim!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/4/2022 6:58:00 AM

A thrilling narration that continues in the mind for long. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/4/2022 4:03:00 PM

Thank you!

Valsa George

Date: 3/31/2022 10:05:00 PM

Beautiful seascape in all its variety and loveliness ! But the foreboding storm shows its unpredictability as it is a metaphor for life ! Great poem, Tania !

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/1/2022 4:00:00 AM

Thank you Valsa!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/31/2022 12:56:00 AM

I love poems about the sea. Great imagery and wish you a best for a win. Hugs.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/31/2022 3:44:00 AM

Thank you Victor! hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/30/2022 12:29:00 PM

Incredible imagery, Tania. So lively with Nature’s energy and stormy foreboding. Splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/30/2022 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Susan!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/30/2022 12:20:00 PM

Fabulous imagery~ I can hear the gulls cries and squawks for food~Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/30/2022 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Paulette!

Jenna Logan

Date: 3/30/2022 12:14:00 PM

Oh goodness, Tania. Your Lay lines are wonderful, and a better photo could not have been found. soup mail

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/30/2022 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Jenna!