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Inspired by Craig Cornish

At twilight, and by day, you are divine, with Wide tender arms, firm as rolling waves we climb Such warmth beneath our feet; its summer treat With nostalgic breeze, and full moon rising to tease Us lovers, I feel celestial hands joining mine, as I frolic between heaven and earth at last Oh the smell of salt and sea, no storm clouds loom On canopy of sky; this moment is shared, I'm not alone I see stepping stones, and lighthouse all aglow for Us; we're like silent ships visiting, you know. *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/11/2016 3:56:00 PM
this is short and sweet, just how I love a poem to be, Iris!
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/13/2016 8:02:00 AM
Then you'd prefer haiku. Thanks dear one.
Date: 2/10/2016 8:11:00 AM
A very beautiful poem, Iris, so romantic and filled with metaphors. 7, Love it! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Sandra. Who wouldn't love the sea.
Date: 2/9/2016 11:56:00 AM
I love your take on the seashore theme, Iris. Beautiful. gl in the contest ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Paul. Good to hear from U again.
Date: 2/6/2016 7:42:00 PM
OMG, you know of Corpus Christi. Iris, have you ever been there? Where are you from if you don't mind me asking? LINDA
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/7/2016 1:39:00 PM
I'm from Belize City, Central America. Never been to Texas.
Date: 2/6/2016 8:21:00 AM
Hi, Iris, the beauty of the seashore. You paint it well with words. Ha, made me miss the beach IN Corpus Christi Texas. A perfect 7 delight. LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:31:00 PM
My big sis once lived in Corpus Christi, Texas. I miss the beach in Long Beach, California, and the beautiful Caribbean Sea of Belize.
Date: 2/5/2016 9:01:00 PM
Excellent write, Iris. The love spills out onto the page.
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