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Sea of Love

Sea of love -she spins me round Sea of love -she will not let me drown Sea of love -is my happy place to be Years go by the spinning stopped Swimming lessons I got Not so happy swimming alone How time can turn to misery Alone in the sea no love to see Did tide go out Did it come in I yearn for another spin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/8/2018 9:34:00 AM
Nice one Superman...
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/9/2018 12:30:00 PM
Hi Silent one , thank you for comment my friend :::)))
Date: 3/7/2018 9:21:00 PM
Well done, Niall. A very touching poem about loss. Line xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/9/2018 11:44:00 AM
Hi Line , thanks for comment::))) hugs
Date: 3/7/2018 9:12:00 PM
Sad and sweet Niall, touching ink my friend, hugs! xomo
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/9/2018 11:43:00 AM
Hi Maureen , thanks for comment ::))) hugs
Date: 3/7/2018 1:09:00 PM
Oh niall i found this so sad, a sense of lost love and hope that someone is there one day to bouy you up and get you swimming with love again... maybe there is a mermaid out there:-) hugs Jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/7/2018 3:48:00 PM
Hi Jan , I like Mermaids ,, like that film 'Splash' lol fine thing :) lol ::))) hugs
Date: 3/7/2018 12:25:00 PM
- Written with humor, Niall ... but, the truth must be said ... everything is more enjoyable when we can share it with someone we love :) - A lovely poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/7/2018 3:43:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you my friend , yes sharing is caring ::))) hugs

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