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Sea of Canyon Trees

Sometime around the first of October, the windswept canyons I go to see. They will be as an ocean of blazing trees. Yes, a multitude of trees. Russet, red, orange and gold, they will surge to their highest tide - the tops of the mountains! These bright trees seem like a giant gilded wave rushing on and on and on in tranquil splendor against a backdrop of persimmon sky in which seagulls glide. Flocks of geese too might be seen vanishing southward in the waning light of sun. On viewing this sea of canyon trees, I feel my soul engulfed by autumn nostalgia as wistfully I gaze out onto the horizon at eventide. However, night falls quickly. I realize I must hasten back to my valley home. For Your Favourite Poem from the first half of 2022' Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 6/3/2022 1:51:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win with this enchanting epic. Vivid imagery and majestic verse weave an opulent narrative Howard
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Date: 4/1/2022 12:48:00 AM
The only problem...Problem.? It's the geese..) There I've said it..! Can they be seen or seen not? (That is the question) In summing up I must Find your poetry to be. ' very fluid.' overly Descriptive! wild and imaginatively driven, oh from such observations I need to be Shriven.. ' LOL )) well done again Andrea '
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Date: 3/5/2022 4:03:00 AM
Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2022 8:24:00 AM
Dear Andrea; congratulations on your win in this Contest. What a wonderful and soothing poem. The imagery is so vivid. A truly beautiful piece of art. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 2/25/2022 2:48:00 PM
congratulations
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Date: 2/25/2022 9:46:00 AM
Hi Andrea, a lovely captivating write as you describe the Canyon Trees almost as a golden, blazing horizon, a sea, so many there are, awesome for us humans to encounter, how wonderful for wildlife for whom it is a natural habitat. Beautiful poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/24/2022 11:37:00 PM
I wish to have a sight of these canyon trees you have described so magnificently !"These bright trees seem like a giant gilded wave rushing on and on and on".... Lovely image Andrea !
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Date: 2/24/2022 8:19:00 AM
Aw such a lovely write dear Ria...So rich in imagery, the second stanza specially, felt as if am looking and admiring at a beautiful painting of nature...Best wishes in the contest dear friend, hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 2/23/2022 6:51:00 PM
"...wistfully I gaze out onto the horizon at eventide" beautiful writing! The entire poem a delight!
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Date: 2/23/2022 5:19:00 PM
Masterfully composed Andrea. This will probably be a top winner. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/23/2022 1:35:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, You composed a lovely portrait with words. It was so descriptive and well written. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 2/23/2022 1:21:00 PM
Your poems always leave me feeling uplifted Andrea. This is outstanding. Blessing
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Date: 2/23/2022 9:13:00 AM
your descriptions are wonderful, andrea! you've painted a beautiful picture with words, which i very much enjoyed...
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Date: 2/23/2022 8:07:00 AM
Beautifully expressed, Andrea. I really liked your choice of images, and you showed them so vividly. Best of luck in Constance's contest.
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Date: 2/23/2022 7:57:00 AM
Great imagery of your memories of the canyons. I have never been, but it sounds fun and beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Blessings and stay well
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