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Sea Change

Sand castles and glass houses, The waters break the same. ***

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/4/2021 4:29:00 PM

Maureen...so very true. I love your focus and delight at your ability to express so much in a few words ! All the best, Susan :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/1/2021 1:48:00 PM

You are so good with these! Your thoughts sharp and precise! I am awed, dear poet!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 2/23/2021 7:42:00 PM

Maureen, your words are better said, but I'm slightly reminded by one of your fellow Canadians, Neil Young singing, "Don't let it bring you down/Its only castles burning". BUT water takes both places away, regardless. Thank you Maureen.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2021 1:49:00 PM

this is very good writing. I like this one a lot!

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/14/2021 12:54:00 PM

Dearest Mo! Something's up! For the last 4 days, I haven't received ONE comment on my posts other than from my good friend Tom Cunningham... three a day as usual any ideas my comments to my posts NOT getting through??? Love, Happy Jack XOX

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/13/2021 11:04:00 AM

Nice Super Mo, always depth, and real meaning to your words, had to study this one, but yes indeed all sea change can bring about destruction, some minor but some truly devastating, cheers David