Sculpting Anne Sexton

Your tongue forced like clothes pins
wetting cinnamon lips,
gnawing at the barrier of one another.

Sketching, Sketching,

Hands shaping you, catching you drawn paper
filed with the note no one left,
a skilled architect,
slowly tracing across your torso.

Dog- earring the pages of your book, inner knowledge;
pages written with pearl droplets of silk
incandescent from moon colored sweat.

Fusing pressed ribs together firm as tuning forks,
asthmatic breath paining the wind
rushing through your chest;
                               sobbing in, sobbing out.

Sheets twisting each other in quicksand
your brail fingers finding my spine
racing down my back like a fire pole.

A sculptor arching your neck, pausing
amethyst eyes impatient like pedestrian traffic
hurried to find nowhere

Stamping, Stamping.

My hand planted in the small of your back
a careful caretaker stripped to the bone,
keeping us pinned together carelessly
                                 inside out, upside down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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George   Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 1:49 PM
She was such a talent and such a tragedy. Powerful portrayal. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Nutter Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 3:32 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
Reynolds Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 4:43 PM
This poem had me rushing through each word to get to the next - i love it. like Denis said, a real sense of urgency is given to the reader here. an amazing, amazing poem, you are quite a talent. love, Kristin
Johnson Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 9:28 AM
As I wrote this those thoughts plundered my thoughts as well. She had so much passion that I do not think this poem gives it justice. However she is amazing. Thank you for your comments, they are generous. -Jason
Devonshire Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 6:00 PM
Jason, you have an amazing gift for language arts! Wonderful images and a creative style make this poem a great read. Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 5:59 PM
Jason, you have an amazing gift for language arts! Wonderful images and a creative style make this poem a great read. Love, Carolyn
Joe Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 10:50 AM
A real sense of urgency in this from the opening stanza on. The narrative seems to demand that it be read in a rush. The repeat word that you use twice helps add to the urgency and creates a brilliant effect.
Moreno Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 6:32 PM
Excellent poem Jason, clever and great use of imagery...Raul
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 13, 2008 at 6:00 PM
Raw, visceral language and striking imagery... Anne is smiling. The best of the confessional poets. She and Plath were good friends. Well done Jason! Best wishes, Keith
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