Screech, Coo, Or Gobble - For Contest

Screech, Coo, or Gobble –for contest


The Dove!!
What would we do
in the darkness of icy winter
sit cold and hungry
listen to its inane cooing?

The Eagle!!
The lofty hermit…
soaring above - alone
screeching at the wind
unapproachable aerie dweller.

The Turkey!!
Ah, the delectable turkey
fat thighs of hefty drumsticks
pale white meaty breast
sweet rendezvous at dinner’s plate.

Less handsome – yet
more filling than the dove.
A sensible choice
Eagle vs Turkey
Symbol vs Sustenance
Ideals vs Pragmatism.



10/10/2015

submitted to – 1776: The Eagle, The Dove, or the Turkey?  poetry contest
sponsor – Mary Oliver Rotman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/17/2015 10:50:00 PM
Love your idea of the poem design :) congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/13/2015 5:34:00 AM
If he verse flowed any other way it wouldn't be John Lawless....a mere one of a kind....glad you're a souper...very glad
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John Lawless
Date: 11/13/2015 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Judy, I have often been accused of beating the drummer
Date: 11/11/2015 7:38:00 PM
Very interesting take on this, John. Leaves you wondering as to what they were thinking in order to get to their choice. The last 2 lines do it for me. Congrats on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 8:24:00 PM
Dan, It seems that politicians have been dabbling in the inane for way too long....Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 11/11/2015 4:39:00 PM
I assume HM means "Holy Mackerel"...whatever that means. Thanks for stopping to read and comment
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Date: 11/11/2015 7:45:00 AM
Love this, John, especially the last stanza! Congratulations! Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I thought that Mr. Franklin would appreciate the more filling choice.
Date: 11/11/2015 4:40:00 AM
Well done, John. Congratulations.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Lin
Date: 11/10/2015 11:02:00 PM
clever, SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks SKAT....always nice to hear from you
Date: 10/11/2015 6:08:00 AM
A great entry for the contest John. Written with wit and prudence!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I'm just catching up on this one today...
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