Screaming For Icecream

My close friend eats lots of ice cream
At its sight his dark eyes would gleam
His name is Vijay
Though a gentle guy, 
If it is denied, he will scream

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Paula Goldsmith

July 23, 2023 at 1:48 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun write. I am with Vijay. No ice cream, then I will scream. Hahaha!!! Have a great day/week.......................

Sara Kendrick

July 23, 2023 at 12:23 PM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara

Tania Kitchin

July 23, 2023 at 4:55 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick!

Kim Merryman

July 22, 2023 at 6:59 PM

I get grumpy when I don't get any ice cream! Congrats on your win, Valsa! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues

July 17, 2023 at 3:50 AM

LOL! My grandson loves ice cream!

Speaks Volumes

July 16, 2023 at 11:56 PM

I think I know that guy .... the reason why, ........ he's a great poet ........ and wouldnt you know it ............. next contest he judges I'll send him my home made ice-cream to try !! ............ Wonderful Limerick Valsa . Really fun !

Valsa George

July 17, 2023 at 12:05 AM

Ha.... ha ! You have written a beautiful limerick. Rhyming is your trade mark. So you can easily excel. I am not sure if he eats ice cream at all .... Lol. Just fun :)