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Scouting the Night

Silly the sadness over less than perfect noses, shapes that were a bit too plump in some places, and far too lean in preferred others – now much older, youth in itself seems perfection enough – Young cares, those mountains we now see as mole-hills -- realizing far greater the little things: a volunteer coming to the door with a hot meal, a call in the evening, a friendly voice just checking, good as a tuck-in, for those who have no one – Not all angels have wings...and many seniors fearing feathers anyway, their pointing through pillows, too much like the tips of pitch-forks scouting the night:)

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Date: 9/26/2021 7:29:00 PM
As you wisely point out, a blessing of later life is the recognition of true value. Your last stanza contains extraordinary metaphor, simile and a title that excite the mind. Well done! Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/27/2021 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Geoffrey; your analysis and understanting of the work, have made my day! Blessings my friend!
Date: 9/25/2021 11:46:00 AM
Loved your poem, Joe, especially "Not all angels have wings...." Definitely! Always beware of those who bear "tips of pitch-forks," my friend.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/25/2021 11:56:00 AM
Hi Milt; thank you. Your comment means a lot to me...yes, have met both kinds. Quite a life this has been. Can't say that I have seen it all, but...a heaven a lot...and a hell of a lot. Blessings!

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