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The moon rose quick to kiss the east

          And blushed its cheeks in rosy rhyme

               Drew back the starry-curtained feast

     And made the reach his bloody crime



O clean me, moon, the sky did chime

          And washed he did with pearly fleece

               Then painted her with stars, sublime

     To dress for eve ... as day had ceased.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay" Poetry Contest, Charles Messina, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/16/2020 6:22:00 PM
Gregory, you keep coming up with amazing new ways to describe the sky. Love this Lay contest entry and am proud of you for taking top honors! ~ John
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Date: 2/16/2020 4:04:00 PM
Wonderful visions of our night taking over our day, Greg! I enjoyed your Lay poem very much, and congratulations on your fine win. Sandra ;)
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Date: 2/16/2020 8:50:00 AM
A wonderful piece, Greg. You had me on the first line...great write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Charlie
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:40:00 PM
So nice G glad to read this today, you are a special writer. Best wishes for another contest win!
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Date: 2/6/2020 7:22:00 AM
Day and night romanticized as only the “Bard” can do! Nice!
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