Scorpio

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Don't claim that you know me don't even try You don't have the tools to open that door, no matter how hard you pry If I share part of me with you you're only getting what I offer My thoughts are constantly evolving and could not fit anyone's coffer I would rather tell you the truth, and bare all of your ire Then spend a second with you, if you' are a ____ liar If you play games with me do not be surprised When I decide to play too, and expose all of your lies However if your fourth right in showing patience with me I will show you a depth of love, your life never thought it would see If you expect that I will chase you, be prepared to want a lot more I'm likely to barely say goodbye, but I'll happily open the door I'm not the type of person, that lives to forgive and forget But if you earn friendship with me, I'll take your place in hell, with no regret If you find yourself my lover, you have won life's greatest prize For after you've been cherished by me, no other will catch your eyes The best moments in my life, are the ones that no one else will ever know Loving, loyal, intuitive and passionate, I am a Scorpio

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Lin Lane

Date: 4/26/2025 12:35:00 PM

I had to listen to this one, Scorpio. It's about as good a raw truth telling of our nature... You covered in depth each of the character traits you mentioned in your last line.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/26/2025 5:46:00 PM

It's regrettable that we are misunderstood by so many people thinking that we have ulterior motives. Or a desire to manipulate. All we really want, it's to share deep loyalty, and unwavering affection. Spending our whole life seeking loves that engulf our soul. Warmly A.S.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/18/2023 1:50:00 PM

Welcome to Lifetime Premium, Scorpio. I like the introduction and the sincere message. I am an Aquarious but find much agreement with your words and philosophy as I understand it. If truly true, we have a great deal in common. A (hope to be) poet friend in Texas, Bill p.s. I'll read more later, and follow your poetry ... no time right now. Bill

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 5/18/2023 6:58:00 PM

Thank you veey much Bill. Your greating was welcome surprise this evening! I as well hope we can be friends it starts with someone saying hello :) Best Regards A.S.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/12/2022 7:44:00 PM

Amen! I hung on every word, and I can’t get through reading anything my brain doesn’t want to, this tho thoroughly enjoyed! I be Taurus, Scorpio balance, that might help lol. My favourite line: I’ll take your place in hell with no regret”. xomo

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 12/15/2022 5:54:00 AM

Everyone should have a Scorpio in their life at least once! Thanks again for the kind words!

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/30/2022 7:19:00 AM

I am a Leo, lol, they are loyal as well. Such an intriguing I Am poem, Scorpio, a confidence you see seldomly. It's got a Banksy vibe to it, mysterious! ~I Am Anaya

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/30/2022 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Anaya ! I really appretiate the kind words Leo's are indeed very loyal! A keen observation of who I truly am! To quote the great "ART SHOULD COMFORT THE DISTURBED AND DISTURB THE COMFORTABLE" - Banksy