Sciatica

And just like that, it started
            This pain that’s nowhere bound
Save for the destination
                     My hip and right on down


Sciatica, Sciatica
             I could just die-atica 
This will not fly-atica 
             I say good bye-atica
 

I stretched till I was putty
                Just what will calm this nerve
Guess years of heavy lifting
                         Got me what I deserve!

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Date: 7/25/2024 4:27:00 PM
aww Mike get well soon, back pain is so excruciating and so debilitating. sending gentle hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/26/2024 4:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan, I am starting to feet better, Happy Friday xxoo
Date: 7/24/2024 11:41:00 AM
Helopo Mike Gentile, i am wondering how you are doing today. i hope that you are feeling better. Happy Wednesday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/25/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hello Mike, i am happy to hear to hear this. Happy Thursday. xxxxxoooooo./DRLENE/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2024 4:59:00 PM
Hello Mike, yes ik am okay thank you. Happy Wednesday to you my dear friend. Your welcome. xxoo /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/24/2024 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Darlene and happy Wednesday to you dear!!! I am a lot better than I was and I so appreciate your kind words!!! I hope you are well too xxoo
Date: 7/23/2024 3:45:00 PM
Hello Mike., oh, I hope you feel better soon. Are you on medication? Yes lifting would bring that on. Feel better soon. Happy Tuesday. xxxxxxxx/ /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/24/2024 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Darlene xxoo
Date: 7/16/2024 7:41:00 PM
Maybe the sciatica is from 'heavy lifting' with form too 'erratica,' Mike. (Two of my three sons are lifters. Oy, my aching back just thinking about what they do their joints...)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/16/2024 7:55:00 PM
That’s probably true GW, plus poor posture while at a desk!!! Good form!!!!!
Date: 7/16/2024 10:02:00 AM
I've had it too Mike, you have my sympathy. Hope you're soon on the mend. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/16/2024 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Tom!!!
Date: 7/15/2024 2:33:00 PM
Have you got this? It is an awful conditions and i know so many who suffer from.. Hope it does not affect you too much my friend..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/15/2024 4:41:00 PM
Unfortunately, I do have it but it is milder than others I know! I’m hoping it’s getting a bit better!! Thank you Silent One!!
Date: 7/15/2024 2:06:00 PM
Hey Mike…..l have suffered with the same thing this year….it feels like it takes forever to get relief but you will… I did the stretches and didn’t overdo it and it eventually lessened and went. I really feel for you Mike as its horrible and wears you down…I hope you get relief soon and are back to doing your triple somersaults soon haha!! I enjoyed the poem! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/15/2024 4:42:00 PM
Good to know Deb, thanks and I’m glad yours is getting better xxoo
Date: 7/15/2024 7:36:00 AM
The humour is cute in this piece; the pain is horrible. I'm sorry you're suffering. Hope it gets better.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/15/2024 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Eileen!!
Date: 7/15/2024 5:08:00 AM
Oh, gee Mike. I hope your pain is not debilitating. That little jingle you've written is not one I would want you to sing.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/15/2024 4:43:00 PM
Aww, thank you Lin xxoo
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