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Once long ago there was a clear blue sky Where roamed free bird and butterfly That’s when came the idea to super citify And to pollution creators deify All put their brain power to diversify Silenced anyone who dared go awry Soon mile high skyscrapers did gratify And every square inch did occupy Way too many to quantify So it was nature they did damnify Now skies are filled with traffic jams that horrify Greenish rain waters that relentlessly acidify Mountain-high billboard ads that do electrify An extravagance of gadgets enough to stupefy Implanted technology meant to dehumanify In light of superfluity, let me just plainly oversimplify Scientists need to eat a big piece of humble pie There’s just no way to justify Why colorful sunsets went by the by And why no one remembers the aroma of apple pie Submitted on March 4, 2018 for contest SCIENCE FICTION sponsored by DEBORAH GUENTHER BEACHBOARD - HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 3/24/2018 10:02:00 PM
Well-crafted with detail, that self-imposed monorhyme was bound to be a challenge. and btw it is quite creative, "dehumanify" is your best one but damnify is good too. Salutations on your win.
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Reason, for a most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/24/2018 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative well-written poem!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2018 9:17:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.
Date: 3/24/2018 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win on this wonderful verse..Line! Hugs Eve~`*
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2018 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/24/2018 9:41:00 AM
Amazing futuristic imagery portrayed in your wonderful Monorhyme, Line. Not too far-fetched if we continue at the speed we've come so far. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2018 11:47:00 AM
Thanks you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.
Date: 3/24/2018 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations Line. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks, Tom for revisiting. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/5/2018 8:49:00 PM
Interesting. Shades of Ray Bradbury, methinks...Good luck in the contest! Best wishes, gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 3/5/2018 8:32:00 AM
Wow, I think you did a great job with this too, Line and I loves the theme though it is a bit scary Good Luck and Happy Monday xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2018 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Mike. Very appreciated.
Date: 3/4/2018 7:47:00 PM
wow... the monorhyme is sometimes to much for me.. , but you did a nice job of putting it together... luck in the contest... and thank you so much for your visits to my poems.. Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/4/2018 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/4/2018 4:39:00 PM
You are so talented, my friend! Oh how I enjoyed! Fave!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/4/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I am honoured.
Date: 3/4/2018 2:58:00 PM
A frigtening thought Line of how things might be in the future.Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/4/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. Hope you don't have nightmares tonight. LOL Line xx

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