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If there's one thing that is bound to alienate school chums who to you like to gravitate it's sudden outbursts of malignant gas though transitory, take a while to pass. Capricious friends now call you inurbane the mood has gone much flatter on the bus, I tell them all it will soon dissipate, open a window, stop making a fuss. Perspicuous is my blame, I make them see the scapegoat is the boy sat next to me. 31st August 2016 For contest 'Ten word challenge', sponsor John Hamilton Words included- Alienate, Gravitate, Malignant,Transitory, Capricious, Inurbane, Flatter, Dissipate, Perspicuous, Scapegoat.

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Date: 9/18/2016 5:44:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha this is so real. What an idea. Well done. :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/19/2016 1:14:00 AM
Thanks, Sunita, Viv x
Date: 9/18/2016 1:20:00 AM
Your toilet humour is refreshingly clean Viv. Well done.
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Date: 9/19/2016 1:13:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:35:00 PM
many congrats Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/18/2016 12:33:00 AM
Thanks Jan, your comments are like a breath of fresh air :) x
Date: 9/17/2016 3:33:00 PM
Well done Viv, great use of the ten words in a humorous write. You mentioned having good taste in one of your comments I think I'll keep me mouth shut.
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Date: 9/18/2016 12:34:00 AM
Thanks James, you still have impeccable taste, though... regards, Viv
Date: 9/17/2016 3:08:00 PM
This was great Viv, knew it had to be you! Great use of the words, very concise along with humor just great! It wasn't me either! Ha ha
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Date: 9/18/2016 12:34:00 AM
I know, John, you were sitting two rows back. Thanks for the placement. Regards, Viv
Date: 9/2/2016 6:08:00 PM
Has anyone told you you're a gas Mr Viv :-) great humour as ever:-) hugs jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/2/2016 11:30:00 PM
It wasn't me..... x
Date: 8/31/2016 4:19:00 PM
It's always the other guy...lol
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Date: 9/1/2016 1:02:00 AM
Whew, Tim..... was that you?
Date: 8/31/2016 3:51:00 PM
This is hilarious, Viv. Great use of 10 not so frequently used words. Your humor rates about a 10. I can't believe how few people there are that actually read and comment on poems. This one deserves to be read.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/1/2016 1:02:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel, and may I say that you have impeccable taste :)

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