Get Your Premium Membership

School, 1950s

A curious cocktail of odours greets us as we move in from playground to corridor, to cloakroom, to classroom. Beeswax fragrance: freshly buffed parquet. Brasso smell: base metal turned to gold. Jeyes Fluid: vapour killing vile germs. Such alchemy starts our day with clean slate. Playground cacophony left behind. Now each sound has discipline, has purpose. First bell: registration shall begin. Next bell: proceed to assembly hall. Lasses stand on round marks; lads on square marks. Regular rows, parallel precision. Stand to attention. Uniform inspection. At ease. Handshakes and smiles. Peace be with you. Silence pervades as we ponder our sins. With ramrod fingers Miss thumps on the keys. Staccato. Left. Right. 'Ride on Ride on in Majesty'. A short sermon on compassion is served. Then, school notices: soccer successes and the listing of scallywags destined for public thrashing at high noon next day. Third bell: learning shall begin. RI lesson. St Paul's Journey yet again. In silence we colour in his route map. With crayons on auto-pilot we day dream. Our apostle arrives in Rome by morning break.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/27/2023 7:22:00 PM
Wonderful details! Nicely written. I can relate I went to Catholic Elementary School, late 60s.
Login to Reply
Hargreaves Avatar
Tony Hargreaves
Date: 6/28/2023 9:10:00 AM
Many thanks Diane. I was at primary school in the mid fifties. Yes, it really was like that. I still have detailed images of St Paul's journey and colouring in with wax crayons. All the best. Tony.
Date: 6/26/2023 8:21:00 AM
Wonderful imagery that puts the reader in the scene. Brilliant writing, Tony.
Login to Reply
Hargreaves Avatar
Tony Hargreaves
Date: 6/28/2023 9:04:00 AM
Hello Franci. Thanks for comment. My poem relates to my primary school experience back in the fifties. Serious discipline. Brutal punishment. Best wishes. Tony
Date: 5/15/2019 11:48:00 AM
Hello Tony Hargraves, This poem is awasome. You painted a lovey scene with your words. Have a nice day my friend.
Login to Reply
Hargreaves Avatar
Tony Hargreaves
Date: 5/20/2019 11:37:00 AM
Hello Darlene. So pleased you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your comment. I write from those powerful images from my school days. The smell of the place was my earliest memory. Take care. Best wishes.
Date: 4/13/2019 9:17:00 AM
'Silence pervades as we ponder our sins'... 'scallywags destined for public thrashing at high noon next day'... I particularly love the dark, wry impact of these lines. Excellent poem, Tony, fave.
Login to Reply
Hargreaves Avatar
Tony Hargreaves
Date: 4/21/2019 1:39:00 PM
Hello Lawrence. Lots of thanks for your positive comment. I do appreciate it. Just wish I had more time to work at this verse. Best wishes. Tony

Book: Reflection on the Important Things