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Scent of Peonies-Bite Size Poem

Frilled edges of flora in bloom Along my garden’s fences Sweet scent of peony perfume Invades my senses They dance on stately stems Pink skirts ruffled at their hems

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2021 2:50:00 PM

beautiful metaphor, Jenna. Big congrats on top win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/2/2021 10:02:00 AM

Peonies dancing in party dresses - what a charming and whimsical picture Jenna. Congratulations for your first place win. All the best.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 10/1/2021 4:15:00 PM

I love this Jenna ~ peonies are such beautiful flowers and your fabulous description of their 'ruffled pink skirts' wow that is delightful... such a well deserved win and a joy to read. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/1/2021 7:12:00 AM

Jenna, beautiful and congratulations in your win in Line's contest, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/1/2021 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations, Jenna! A lovely little poem. I love pink Peonies. ...Fran

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/1/2021 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by with your kind comments, Fran.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/30/2021 10:21:00 PM

"Pink skirts ruffled at their hems" Beautiful! Congratulations on your win!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 10:23:00 PM

Thanks for the thoughts, Alex.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/30/2021 10:13:00 PM

Such lovely imagery, Jenna, congratulations on your win:)

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 10:17:00 PM

Good morning, and thank you, Jo.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/30/2021 7:30:00 PM

Delightful! So artistically-poetically penned! Congrats on your top win, Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 9:38:00 PM

Thank you for such kind thoughts, Seeker.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/30/2021 4:49:00 PM

What a beautiful poem, Jenna ~ a delight to read. Congrats on your well deserved Gold !

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 9:37:00 PM

I am SO happy you liked it so well. Thanks a lot, Line.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2021 4:33:00 PM

This is so lovely, Jenna! Congratulations on 1st!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 9:37:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2021 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your pink Peonies sound so very beautiful. Love this write and your flowers. Have a blessed day................

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 9:36:00 PM

It's such a beautiful flower. I love the delicate petals. Thanks, Paula.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/30/2021 12:06:00 PM

Congrats Jenna on your top placement! Your pony poem is filled with great visuals!! Happy Thursday!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 9:35:00 PM

Hi Mike, and thanks so very much.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/30/2021 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations, friend, on your first place finish in the contest. I'm proud of you!!!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 9:26:00 AM

Oh, thanks so much for letting me know, Milt. I'm delighted by the placement. It's also nice that someone is proud of me. hugs!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/23/2021 2:36:00 AM

Colourful flowers that look lovely in any garden, Good luck with this bite size gem. Hope your move goes well today. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 3:38:00 PM

They really are lovely. I'm home and have done all I can. I'll be ok. Thanks for caring, dear Tom.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/22/2021 10:12:00 AM

This is a lovely, sweet poem, Jenna, about one of my favorite flowers...the peony. I remember decorating graves with them when I was a kid. They are in full bloom here the end of May.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/22/2021 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Milt. I treasure your thoughtful comments.

Chetta Achara

Date: 9/22/2021 9:48:00 AM

Very nicely written....I, too, love peonies!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/22/2021 11:29:00 AM

They are such a fragile petaled flower!! Thanks, Chetta .

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/22/2021 6:15:00 AM

Love this. Love peonies. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/22/2021 6:54:00 AM

Many thanks for your thoughts, Gina.