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I love to sit under a tree And smile as songbird sings, He cocks his head and stares at me And drops white slimy things. And now behold, the leaves above Reflect a change of season A touch of brown, a flare of red A dripping, sappy lesion. Migrating robins from the north, Their song too sweet for words, Awake my soul; my heart calls forth, “Shut up, you idiot birds!” My eyes are like a dried up sponge And soak in scenes of nature, The tree, the brook, the winding road, Some dead, runover creature. And with my love, in peaceful bliss As frequently I am She shares with me in one sweet kiss Her life, her soul, her phlegm. And in a flash of brilliant truth When fireflies start to dance, I relive golden days of youth (And promptly wet my pants). Happy April Fool's Day, everybody! Wrote this in college the night before a final when I should have been studying...

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Date: 5/16/2020 11:30:00 AM
Just revisiting this on my faves list - even better the second time around!
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John Watt
Date: 5/16/2020 2:26:00 PM
Michelle, Thanks for finding value even in the silly things. I'm glad this one tickles your funny bone. We all need a laugh now and then ~ John
Date: 4/2/2020 5:11:00 PM
Lovely piece penned so well John, good imagery with nice rhyme too. Hope all well, keep healthy and warm,Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 4/2/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thanks for the read and kind words, my friend! Trust all is well and that your rough throat and weariness earlier this week did not turn into anything serious. Blessings, John
Date: 4/2/2020 3:45:00 PM
other very humorous lines I loved as well!
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Date: 4/2/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 4/2/2020 3:44:00 PM
hahaha. Was this the April first poem you told me about!! Wetting one's pants remembering babyhood. haha
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Date: 4/2/2020 11:26:00 PM
Yes, I think I'll take it down in a few days. Absolute silliness!
Date: 4/1/2020 10:58:00 PM
This poem is a kind of wonderful difference, love it. John.
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Date: 4/1/2020 11:20:00 PM
Harry, thanks for dropping by and for spreading the love ~ John
Date: 4/1/2020 3:59:00 PM
what a perfect april fool's poem, john! every verse was a funny surprise and gave me a real lift today (which is always appreciated these days...)
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John Watt
Date: 4/1/2020 4:05:00 PM
Loved your post today too, Ilene. The days vacillate between tales of tragedy, heroism, generosity, lighthearted humor, and anxiety. Those of us who enjoy the even keel of normalcy have quite the emotional roller coaster these days!
Date: 4/1/2020 1:55:00 PM
LOL, had a chuckle at the final line!
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Date: 4/1/2020 1:58:00 PM
Jack, thank you for the laugh!
Date: 4/1/2020 1:53:00 PM
I love the turn on traditional poetry with 'white slimy things' 'idiot birds' and 'runover creature' - reminds me of a pretty spring morning a few years ago - I was walking and admiring the beauty of nature - and walked straight into a giant spider web! Ewww! Anyway, thanks for this amusing write - a fave!
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Date: 4/1/2020 2:04:00 PM
p.s. yesterday our pest control inspection turned up a black widow spider hiding in our eaves... ack!! At least it was "self-isolating" and not roaming around our kitchen, lol!
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Date: 4/1/2020 1:57:00 PM
Michelle, thank you for indulging in this bit of silliness. Nature does tend to be more messy in reality than in the lovely photographs and poetry, yes? Appreciated your visit and fun comment ~ John

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