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Scavengers

Corrupt politicians sleep
In each other's beds
While I hide my gold from them

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/15/2013 2:40:00 AM

So very true on your words ;} nice write .

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/15/2013 6:50:00 AM

Hi Debbie, thank you :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/13/2013 3:07:00 PM

I'm not corrupt!!! LOL! This is a funny poem -I like! MC

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/13/2013 6:59:00 PM

MC ...thank you for finding the humor...:)

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 7/26/2013 7:17:00 PM

Ah, so true. Kilmer

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/2/2013 11:10:00 AM

Thank you :)

Tara Jennings

Date: 7/7/2013 4:02:00 PM

lol i love it

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/7/2013 7:55:00 PM

tara, thank you :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/4/2013 11:59:00 AM

Those who make the laws are usually the first ones who break them. Good write

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/4/2013 2:36:00 PM

Robert, ditto... thank you !

Don Johnson

Date: 5/31/2013 5:57:00 PM

gotta watch dem pollies ....theys always sidesteppin casting blame elsewhere... a mate said be a pollie don ...i said i cant lie well enuff...

Karen Anglesey
Date: 6/1/2013 2:44:00 PM

Don, you are so correct ! You probably have to lie on the sly quite a bit in politics :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/31/2013 2:22:00 PM

Karen I love the satirical note to this. Sums it up beautifully good pen Linda

Karen Anglesey
Date: 6/1/2013 2:44:00 PM

Shadow, thank you for the appreciation of the satire. :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/24/2013 7:21:00 PM

Hi Karen, I've been away just over a week and back in I find this. I write into a local paper regularly where I have an opponant on political matters, it can be serious and sometimes funny, I think my last write has him on the ropes lol. Your poem is brilliant, right up my street and I think you speak for us all. thank you. Take care, Richard

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/24/2013 7:30:00 PM

Richard **thank you for the indepth review of my poem. Would love to see your political articles. Are they available online?**

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/22/2013 2:37:00 PM

You certainly have a cynical view on our leaders. Plenty of them are corrupt but I believe that some are sincere. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/22/2013 5:33:00 PM

Hi Matthew, As the first line says, I do have a cynical view of corrupt politicans. Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 10:20:00 PM

hey thanks for telling me Children of the Year was being featured now!! let me go see one of your poems too!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/22/2013 6:46:00 AM

Andrea, you are welcome and thank you for the visits. I appreciate your time reviewing my poetry. :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/20/2013 9:13:00 AM

HA! Very, very well stated! A massive truth here! My mattress has extra cash cushion. It's what helps me sleep better at night... ;)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/22/2013 6:45:00 AM

Caleb, great idea to stuff our mattresses instead of turning it over to the greedy banks. I think I will bury my money in an empty can in the backyard ...:)

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/20/2013 8:19:00 AM

A very good synthesis of corruption. In Italy there are politicians showing their gold and using it to improve their positions.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/22/2013 6:44:00 AM

Mario, our politicians hide the gold they scavenge from us while they tout their honesty.... thank you for the critique. :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/20/2013 6:38:00 AM

Like a senryu should be!...great!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/22/2013 6:41:00 AM

Caleb... thank you for the great critique. I am glad that you felt the emotion in this. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2013 4:25:00 AM

Interesting take on our political situation ...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visits..Yes, those that abuse sometimes use grand apologies to draw the person back only each time the abuse gets worse..Sara

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/22/2013 6:40:00 AM

Thank you for the in depth review. I appreciate your visit :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 5/19/2013 5:49:00 PM

Oh my... I have a poem about political corruption too. I'll post it tomorrow. Again, fine writing! Jack

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 7:27:00 PM

Jack, I will be checking out your poem. I'll bet it's great....Super souper evening to you :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/19/2013 2:52:00 PM

- Thanks for the words of truth...... :)) Karen - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 2:53:00 PM

You are welcome Anne Lise. Thank you for commenting. Your words are appreciated

Jack Horne

Date: 5/19/2013 12:18:00 PM

lol, such truth here

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 12:23:00 PM

Thank you for seeing the satire in this as well as the truth. Hope you're having a sunny Sunday !

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 5/19/2013 9:43:00 AM

Wow what a smart senryu :D, I loved the topic, and the way you uttered it really such a provoked one :D thank you for you last visit Karen, your words are really make my day, my mood :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, Yanny

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 9:48:00 AM

Yanny, I am glad you enjoyed this. Have a beautiful day hugs to you :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/19/2013 6:45:00 AM

Don't let the tax man catch you*lol*. This is delightful in it's simplicity. Well done!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 9:06:00 AM

Ha ha, this one kind of just popped into my head although it's not a form of poetry I often choose. Dedicated to the taxman (IRS) and their scandalous behavior recently.

Joseph May

Date: 5/19/2013 5:27:00 AM

well said Karen....our politicians are being bought by the highest bidder....thank you for your comments on my poem....hugs

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 9:01:00 AM

Thank you kindly for the comments. I appreciate your point of view.

John Posey

Date: 5/19/2013 2:03:00 AM

I must attempt to comment on the witty little gem. I'll try not to say something stupid...This is the blanket of truth woven with the loom of creativity.... Extremely well done....Jake

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 2:16:00 AM

Jake, not too well hidden under the blanket of truth I hope. I am obviously 'fed up' with our system of government. Just had to let it out. Thank you for the generous comments :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/19/2013 1:17:00 AM

Well this was definitely different! Brutally honest I would say... I couldn't help but think of the gold diggers climbing their way up the corporate ladder... the fact you mentioned "gold" in the last line was a nice added touch. And Scavengers is a fitting title. Good senryu!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2013 1:16:00 AM

VERY good. we all need to be hiding our gold about now!!!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/19/2013 2:14:00 AM

I agree. Thank you for the visit. I hope it stirs the pot ! Have a splendid day :)