Scary Tunnel

The tunnel is long and musty with water dripping from the wall
Into murky puddles where pavement is slippery and easy to fall
It is cold and empty with a lingering stench in thick, heavy, air
The dark figure follows me, bearing down, with a penetrating stare
I move with persistent strength and courage toward the light
The figure is fear that can catch me, consume my being with fright
So I have an inner shield to ward it off, refusing to let it be near
It is scary, relentless, ugly, fast moving, demonizing fear
It serves no purpose, only a warning to destroy what it clenches
To keep me lost in the depth of its known hidden trenches
Waiting to paralyze those who give in, as it preys on weakness it sees
The light shines ahead, as I focus only on reaching it, where it frees
Where I have faith as I exit, I will be out of one of the darkest places
Knowing, I overcame the luring force, in a tunnel with scary faces

Heidi Sands              

9/26/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pett Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Well written Heidi, I think your poem depicts the real and most feared by most living creatures and that is the unknown, most certainly scary and thought provoking, good luck in contest. :))
Sands Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Roy. I am happy with your feedback for the theme of the contest :)
Kiser Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Ooh, scary yet I love the way you overcome those faces in the tunnel. Well done.
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Thank you very much. I am happy to hear that :)
Trifiatis Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Profound wondrous rhyme dearest, Heidi! A fav!
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Demetrios. I am so happy to hear that and a fav too! I appreciate your support. :)
May Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:48 AM
A scary journey through the tunnel...Nicely written..Gl in the contest
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your support :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Spooky image Heidi, the stuff nightmares are made of. Good luck. .Tom
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Yes, I tried to fit the scary contest theme. Thank you, Tom :)
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Feelings of fear well expressed, Heidi..emotions evoke the imagery of the scary tunnel..best for a win.
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate all your support. Have a nice day :)
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