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Scary Tunnel

The tunnel is long and musty with water dripping from the wall Into murky puddles where pavement is slippery and easy to fall It is cold and empty with a lingering stench in thick, heavy, air The dark figure follows me, bearing down, with a penetrating stare I move with persistent strength and courage toward the light The figure is fear that can catch me, consume my being with fright So I have an inner shield to ward it off, refusing to let it be near It is scary, relentless, ugly, fast moving, demonizing fear It serves no purpose, only a warning to destroy what it clenches To keep me lost in the depth of its known hidden trenches Waiting to paralyze those who give in, as it preys on weakness it sees The light shines ahead, as I focus only on reaching it, where it frees Where I have faith as I exit, I will be out of one of the darkest places Knowing, I overcame the luring force, in a tunnel with scary faces Heidi Sands 9/26/18

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Date: 9/29/2018 6:09:00 AM
Well written Heidi, I think your poem depicts the real and most feared by most living creatures and that is the unknown, most certainly scary and thought provoking, good luck in contest. :))
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Roy. I am happy with your feedback for the theme of the contest :)
Date: 9/26/2018 9:24:00 PM
Ooh, scary yet I love the way you overcome those faces in the tunnel. Well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 10:41:00 PM
Thank you very much. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 9/26/2018 12:06:00 PM
Profound wondrous rhyme dearest, Heidi! A fav!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. I am so happy to hear that and a fav too! I appreciate your support. :)
Date: 9/26/2018 11:48:00 AM
A scary journey through the tunnel...Nicely written..Gl in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 9/26/2018 11:35:00 AM
Spooky image Heidi, the stuff nightmares are made of. Good luck. .Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 11:42:00 AM
Yes, I tried to fit the scary contest theme. Thank you, Tom :)
Date: 9/26/2018 11:14:00 AM
Feelings of fear well expressed, Heidi..emotions evoke the imagery of the scary tunnel..best for a win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate all your support. Have a nice day :)

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