Scary Moments

When thunder howled to burn the sky
as lighting rods seemed to betray,
this night so bleak, it can’t defy
wild rainstorm flooding streets in gray.

Till darkness sprawled like ghostly frame
when thunder howled to burn the sky,
to  crush each tree and post aflame
and even drowning  birds nearby.

Lives feared the wrath of sea’s outcry
for tempest burst on gates ,enraged
when thunder howled to burn the sky
invading more homes disarranged.

I watched the sun clear lanes’ debris
when daytime came pricked like cacti;
a terror wiping city’s glee
when thunder howled to burn the sky.


Shadow Hamilton's Scary Moments
*Snapshots of Haiyan Typhoon Disaster, 2013*

Written 5/26/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 9, 2014 at 10:08 AM
NETTE, Congrats on your Scary moment win. Thanks for sharing........Love Linda
Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Really scary and a great poem. Should have been the top winner. Love, Joyce
Sirak Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Fantastic imagery. Love the line "a terror wiping city's glee" Those few words summarize the poem.
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 10:11 PM
I remember this one. Best imagery in the contest. Congrats to you
Hamilton Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 10:32 AM
great poem Nette congrats on place ty for taking part hugs
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in the contest, nette
Sathasivam Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Excellent. Described well. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Smith Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 11:15 PM
Sounds frightening... I like storms bit not destructive ones... Beautifully described... Hugs Tim
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 9:55 PM
gosh did you just experience such a storm, Nette. It reads like something that you have just witnessed. Hope not. Today was so sunny and lovely over here. It was great to see you doing a quatern. Aren't they AWESOME?
Callus Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 3:12 PM
An expressive write where the ball was set rolling with a perfect first stanza! Imagery is such a faithful servant of yours! // paul
George   Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Incredible imagery, Nette, and incredible writtin. You are so.....gifted. Lainie Also, thank you for your very kind comments. .
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 7:49 AM
- A gray and heavy day - but, afterwards so fresh and delicious - Beautifully described in your poem, Nette. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 7:33 AM
wonderful write Nette,getting ready for the rains here too
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